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The sword at his neck and him looking down at the blood red carpet of death.'I've been caught, i've really done it this time.' He thought.

"You Felway R. Pinerock are wanted for breaking into the royal castle, and attempting to steel the secret, ancient scrolls." Boo's came for the background."...Your penalty, is death."

Now he knew no one in the house was on his side. He was about to be killed in the castles throne chamber in front of thousands of people. Felway's only hope was her. He kept glancing at the windows, she better come soon or it will be too late.

He felt the sword rest on his shoulder. It began to lift back and Felway closed his eyes. 'She's too late.' He thought. The tension was maxed and Felway knew the sword would comedown any second now. He heard the whoosh of the sword moving though the air followed by an extreme crash of glass.

Felway ducked as quickly as possible and spun around and kicked the three guys around him over and he jumped up and saw her.

Siki was in crouched in a window from above watching silently meeting eye contact with Felway. Her bandana pulled over her mouth and nose, so only her eyes were showing. Silently jumped out the window and ran through a street busling with people to another building. She waited silently, alone.
For once she wished she could pull off her bandana and show Felway who she really was, but she couldnt, they would kill her for sure. She hated her kingdom and everyone in it. Forcing her to retrieve information and kill. She especially hated her uncle who forced her to do it in the first place.
She pulled her hair back and waited for Felway, she held her knife if needed.

'Thank you so much, stranger.' Felway thought as he grabbed a soldiers swords and shoved it through another guys stomach.

They met the night he was caught breaking into the castle. Apparently they were there for the same reason, to get the scrolls. After all it was her fault that he was caught. She ran into him making Felway knock over a vase sending a crash. Naturally he would have been able to get away and hide before any guards came but the girl handed him a piece of paper with only directions to an address.
He sat there and looked at the paper and he figured that somehow, that girl knew he was here.He looked up at where the girl had stood, but she was now gone. Felway looked straight forward, and running down a hall, were four security guards after him. Busted. Only hope was that she would come save him.

There were too many people attacking him, and if he stayed in here much longer then he knew for sure that he would be caught. He needed a distraction, but what. He thought and sliced three more guards. It came to him and he ran over to the organ at the left side of the room. He jumped and slammed the sword straight through the organ setting every key to play at once and be held. The sound made his ears feel like exploding. But he looked and the distraction worked. He ran for the broken window where the girl had once been and jumped out. He took out the piece of paper she gave him. he ran to the destination.

Kia stood silently in the throne room, waiting for the execution. When the window shattered, she jumped behind a pillar to watch what happened next. She watched in fascination as Felway fought the guards and destroyed the royal organ. Once Felway escaped, she put up her hood and melted into the shadows, smiling softly.

Zen watched from above, he grinned and jumped out of a window. He jumped on Attis, his horse, and rode off to the meadow. When he got there he sat down, waiting for someone. He began playing his violin.

Siki watched as Felway appered in front of her. She watched, him. "Are you hurt?" she asked. Slowly walking up to him.
"Did anyone follow you?" she asked, putting her knife away.

Zen paushed his violoin wondering where he/her/they were. ((I'm trying to let anyone be the person he's waiting for))

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Siki heard the violin, not a good sign. She glared toward the sound, he must have heard them.

Zen heard something and walked toward the sound, he held his sword ready.

Felway approached Siki. She asked if he was hurt but turned her head as if not wanting to get an answer.
"Do you hear that" She asked. ((Example control another persons character))
Felway listened, "No, i don't here anything."
"Come on!" She yelled and grabbed his arm running in the opposite direction.
"Why are we running?" Felway asked.
"He'll kill us." Siki answered dryly.

Zen laughed. "Me? Hurt Felway? You're kidding!" He said with a thick british accent.

Felway saw a guy come down from a hill and say something aloud and barley was able to make out what was said. "You hear that? He says he wouldn't hurt me!" Still not knowing who the girl was.
All she did was glace at him. And that was all that it took for him to know something was wrong.

Zen laughed. "Felway? It's Zen." He said, eye twinkling.

This guy was no doubt out of range of being heard, but Felway could hear him. He could hear what he was saying though his mind? Most of this all was a blur. He remembered be trained and given the mission to go to the castle and steal the scrolls, but he couldn't remember who told him, who this girl was, who this guy was, or who is family is. It was like he was brain washed.

"Zen." he said to himself. "I don't..."

The girl lead him on.

Zen ran after them. "Felway? Did you complete it? Did you get the scrolls?" He asked. "If you have the scrolls they contain the information." He said.

Felway heard the voice through his mind again. It must have come from there. Zen was still out of hearing range, and this girl would have definitely looked back at the comment.

The scrolls. Was, Zen the one who sent him on the quest? And this girl. If she was going to steal the scrolls too, then wouldn't that make her a Felway, enemies?

Felway needed answers. "Stop!" He demanded. "Stop at once!" He shoved his heels to the ground and made them both jerk and fall over.

Siki fell over and toppled over, bringing her knife to his throat on instinct. "He's not to be here." she hissed. "He'll kill me." she said calmly taking the knife back. She slipped the last scroll out of her pocket. She stood up. "Do you want this?" she asked.
She couldnt let him know who she was. Shes known him all her life, but he couldnt know. And she wouldnt hurt him. That Zen guy has been after her, the one person who might reconize her.

Zen ran up to the. "Let go of him, now girly." He growled, pointing his sword at her throoat.

Siki sighed. And pulled her bandana up higher. Kicking Zens sword out of the way she pulled another knife of hers to his throat. "You know nothing, go." she said.

Zen grabbed her arm and flipped her arm over, he whistled and Attis came. He jumped on, dragging Fel way on with him, he galloped away.

Siki shook her head and threw her knife in the horses leg. Catching up to them she pulled them off the horse. She held the scroll. "I have what you need." she tucked it back away. She looked away, not wanting Zen to reckonize her. "its worth nothing as an imcomplete set."

Zen sighed as he healed Attis.
"Girly," He frowned as a gust of air lowered her badana. "Siki?" He asked. "Girl, I haven't seen you in so long." He said, emotionless.

Siki put her knife down and turned away. "I dont know what your talking about, she said evenly pullin gup her bandana again. "I dont know anyone names Siki." she lied.

Zen rolled his eyes. "Siki, I know who you are girly." He said, his english accent fading and growing at some parts of the sentence.

Siki put her knife to Zen throat, looking at Felway, then back at Zen. "Im not Siki, and ill kill you if i need to."

Zen sighed and knocked her knife away. He ripped her bandana off, "Siki! Ah HA!" He said in a playful tone.

Siki pushed him back, did he not know she was a killer? She snatched her bandana back, scowling. "Im not siki!" she kicked him in the shin. And put her knife away, turning away to put on her bandana, did Felway notice? or did he think Zen was a moron?

Siki turned to face Felway. "No its not." she fumbled her bandana and it fell to the ground, showing her face fully. She froze and looked at Felway, then quickly turned away.

Kia lept from tree to tree, silently and watched them argue from afar

"Siki?" Felway interrupted. "No. It couldn't be! The Siki i know was promised to be kept safe forever. The Siki I know would never lie to me like this." His voice raised as he talked. "This is NOT Siki and i refuse to have you lie about her anymore!"

((EDIT: I reversed order of the posts))

Zen rolled his eyes. "Siki is real. Not some damsel in destress we all know that. She would be bored being protected no adventure in it." He said.

Siki looked at Felway, then Zen. She didnt know what to do. Snatching her knife. "I should kill you now." she said to Zen. "Now you know who i am."

"But Siki is safe. I don't remember who told me. Or if they are even still alive. But a promise is a promise,... even if the person who promised it dies, the promise with carry on. As a memory!" Felway yelled.

Siki looked at Felway, he knew. She turned to him. "I didnt have a choice." she said. "Im as safe as i allow myself to be." she said.

Zen laughed. "Felway, you've lost your memory again! What was it this time? The horse?" He said, not worrying about Siki.

"The horse had nothing to do with it. And you're the one lying! If anyone brainwashed me it would be you! I know there are machines that are able so you can select bits of information to get rid of, and you must have done it to me!" Felway yelled and right hooked Zen with a blow to the side of the head so hard it momentarily knocked him out.
Felway's attitude completely change as he looked over to the girl who just told him the truth."S-s-s," his voice trembled, "si-Siki? You're... here?" He reached out to touch her face. "And... And you have the scroll?" He added.

"Yes, but only part of what is needed." She said.

Felway's eyes started to water. "You have the scroll that part of the formula to restore memory?"

She nodded.

Kia smiled when she saw the scroll

Siki stepped away from Felway and shook her head. "Im not allowd to give you the scroll, my uncle wouldnt allow it." She turned away, pulling her bandana up again. "Its the only way to keep my sister alive, and myself." She looked at Zen. "And my next mission will be killing you, fugitive." she clenched her fists. "I have no choice." She took another step back.

She looked directly at Felway, it was so hard, she grew up with these people and now was forced to hurt them. She took one look at Felway again, and stumbled backward. She couldnt do it this time she just couldnt do it. "Just- just kill me now." she said unable to meet his eyes.

Zen didn't react to the blow. "Felway, your father wouldn't approve." He growled.

Siki looked at Zen, he wasnt anything like he used to be. "your-your father is living?" she said, white as a ghoast.

"Siki don't do this. We could go back. Well my father is living and he always thought of Felway as a son. Yes, a few years ago he was sentenced to death. You think that stopped him?" He let out a harsh laugh. "Siki we could go back. Just forget about this we could be friends, hijackers." He said with a said rueful smile.

Siki shook her head. "I- i killed him, i must have. I saw it!" she turned around, if her uncle found out he would kill her sister. "I cant go back." she said mindlessly. "I dont have a choice, shes going to die, i have to save her." she couldnt think straight.

Zen took a breath at the mention of her sister. He chuckled a bit. "You're sister was quite the deal back then. But do you really think my father would die becuase a little girl set out to kil him? Do you remember who you hung with back then? His son." He replied.

Siki turned around a bite out of it. "My sister is living because of me, im an assasin! And and and." she stumbled in her words. she looked directly at Zen. "His son, you, and Felway...." she trailed off.

Zen raised an eyebrow. "My son? " He asked.

"You have a son?" Siki asked, snapping out of her thoughts.

"No, I was wondering what you said." He said, bewildered. "Who's son?" He asked, his british accent slowly fading into street.

"Your father son, you. And Felway thats who i used to hang around with." she looked at the sky. "and you still manage to get yourself in trouble."

Zen chuckled. "Mr. Juesd never really liked me." He said, referring to the general store's owner.

Siki shook her head. "No." then she looked down at Felways sword. "And..." she looked at Felway and Zen. "Will you help me save my sister?"she asked suddenly.

Zen's face went solem as he turned his eyes toward the ground. His hair flopped in front of his face. When he came back up there was a mischevious grin on his face. "Do we get to slaughter some stuck up princes?" He asked.