Creative Writing discussion

Here is the official discussion thread for To Disobey a command. Here is where we try to make sense of everything that is writing in the RPPOS.

Please do not talk about what should be said or what you want in the story. Just flow with what happens.

To avoid side chats in the actual thread, please always talk here.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Here is our story so far:

So Felway was caught stealing a scroll and was about to be excecuted when Siki saved him, but she is also the reason he got caught. We find out later that they grew up together, but Felway has lost his memory. He needs to find the other scrolls to get his memory back, and Siki needs the scrolls to save her sister. They meet up with Zen, who also grew up with them. They are traveling around to get the other scrolls. Meanwhile, Kia is following them around because she wants the scrolls too. THey just recently just noticed her, but she won't reveal herself to them. (Written by Dark Angel)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~Character Profiles:
Zen: the oldest, best at magic, smart and sly

Felway: great fighter, but has almost no memory of Siki, Zen or anything

Siki: good fighter, strong in magic but doesnt know it and cant stand it, know sure what she really wants yet

Angle: Maid/Slave

Kia: Unknown, unpredictable. Follows around Siki, Felway, and Zen. Plans on stealing scrolls.

(Written By Yuki)

Oh, so If I understand correctly we're not allowed to use other people's characters in this one?

So, what is going on? Are they all friends or enemies?

We're not sure. We have to Role Play It Out

alright

yeah kat you got it right.

And i agree to the role play it out. but based off of what Zen said, you could tell that Felway and Zen knew each other before this all started.


and with the part with Kia. When it said she disappeared into the shadows, what do you mean by that? did she just hide in the shadows or actually go into the shadow?

Zen mysteriously 'healed' his horse did anyone catch that

no, kia is just good at disapearing. It was metaphorical, not literal. It just seems like she melts into the shadows

the horse thing was cool, kat

ʇɐʞ Kat wrote: "Zen mysteriously 'healed' his horse did anyone catch that"

i read it. but i don't remember thinking too much of it. It could have been enough just to knock the horse over and not enough to do permanent harm to the horse.

lol, siki likes Felway, but cant be with him

Mysterious.
I was like thinking about Rangers Apprentice this whole time.
Was anyone else?

what is that? i was thinking about Gracling

What is that?

a book where a girl has to kill people, then falls i love and then saves people, its good, you should read it!

btw Siki is said See-Key

Oh.
Ranger's Apprentice is about midevil times and this orphan about how he becomes a rangers apprentice and has to save alyss and cassandra and fight monsters and stuff.

cool i wanna read that! I always liked the name Cassandra..

:D
But one of the book's end is devastating cause he's about to save her---
then it ends -.-
not going to tell you which one though

lol, its on my too read!

same with yours

yep, is so Zen ans Siki and Felway are childhood friends?

*Shrugs*
Let's see how it roleplays out. Probably. I love to keep the readers guessing.

lol yes!

Whoa, Felway is 16
Just noticed that. Oh well, maybe he could turn out to be an older-brother figure or something.

hmm maybe...

Yes.
I sorta wanted him to be like an older brother.
Like Fred and George in Harry Potter.
*Takes in breath and bites lip* But they die....
Er

hmmm
well maybe i was thinking that or something else
*grin*

well they all know each other from before, you know that by the text, but how they knew each other hasn't been said.

And lol i knew how to pronounce siki.

and i've picked up Graceling in the library and started reading it. I didn't get far. I've seen rangers apprentice but i haven't read it.


and i haven't read a book thats like this. So i haven't been able to compare it to anything.


Kat kat, you are the best d@mn blocker i've ever met XD!

lol, it takes a bit to get into it, gracling i mean

Blocker? How am I good at it?
Sorry!

pardon but what is a blocker?

I'm asking the same thing.
But thank you, John.
Even though I don't know what it is...

hmm is it someone in hocky?

No, he doesn't know me in real life.
Well I hope so.
I think it has something to do with how I type.
See how I press 'enter' everytime?
It makes a [:] block.

really? oh

Not sure,
that's just my guess.

oh well its a good guess, i think

no no no. A blocker is a person that says no to something. But kat kat, don't be offended. I had an awesome time trying to get around your blocks.

Like when zen kept trying to push that Siki was siki and then siki and felway kept trying not to believe it. That was blocking.

It might have seemed that siki and i were the ones that were doing the blocking, but it was 2 against 1, so zen did the blocking.


and i lol at how old zen is compared to siki.
Siki-15
Felway-16
Zen-22
Kia-17

lol, Siki and Felway are closest in age... or Felway and Kia

Ooh some summer romance?
I'm assuming it's summer...
Well I couldn't let you get all the fun!

lol, Kat! Dont let us in, i like guessing!

I was guessing too...

really?

Yes.

lol, i thought you knew!

haha. and i also thought that its funny how i thought zens accent was southern. XD

lol, Zen was british, then southern!

lol, he has lots of cover ups.
I said street

oh!

lol