Creative Writing discussion

The Discussion page for the story Tangible.

that letter from dad was creepy. so cool

daddys waiting....

haha yeah, i thought that made the whole letter too. it was creepy. but it was just... idk how to put it.

I thought that was creepy too. O also added that it was written in blood.

....
But who's blood...?

Muhahaha! >:)

that was a nice touch, Marissa

it was. it makes me think.

it will be hard to get around. But it was a nice add on.

S- you know that 1000 yen is like ten dollars right?

yep, but i wasnt quite sure what you guys wanted from the vase.... I can change it to 30000 if you want...

well DA described it as her moms favorite vase. so i was kinda thinking around $100.

okay then 30000 is too much, it 8,420 is 100, so is 9000 okay?

sure... how much is that?

a little over a hundred

thats good then

ok, this story keeps getting better

yeah, everyone does a great job writing. I need to add to is soon though.

sure, your the starter you know the story best!

how does her power work? or is that just part of the mystery?

Her power is to restore "feeling" to everything.

Every second of everyday, everything is slowly losing feeling. And it takes a person like Dot to touch the object and restore feeling to the object.