Creative Writing discussion

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I have no plan for this story so please mess it up as much as you like.

You know what the rules are, no talk about what you want to happen. Please have fun.

this one sounds like it's going to be fun

i made the antagonist, lol!!!

someone needs to make the character that is sitting next to him though.

yes any volunteers?

im hoping kat will do it or marissa, but if they don't do it, you could make a girl character be his partner.

yes i guess so.

I volunteer! wait for what?

to be the girl character that rides with alex, if ya want.

Marissa hasn't signed in yet today and i think it would be best if her gave her an opportunity to fit a character in. But if she doesn't want it Michael could have it.

Yes!

lol.

Micheal, i'm sorry to be the D-bag that is deleting all your posts, but please don't post twice, one right after the other in pass on stories. A person will get to the story eventually. ;)

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Okay, I took the spot. I'm riding with Alex? I still need to read most of the posts.

Yes

cool post!!!!

me?

yeah, you!

wow you're a fast reader! and hahaha no. I'm sorry but i didn't want to do that. I mean, i wanted to say that but writing that much and changing the story line that much made me feel like a dictator. I know that you guys could have come up with something just as good or better but i didn't want to write that much, i just felt the need to because all you guys were doing was talking about fixing cars and junk. So i just decided to set the plot. Sorry.

no! i love it! i couldn't come up with something like that. i was waiting for you to add more to the plot. like i said, i'm a timid rper

its great, this kinda reminds me of the american speed racer show!

WHAT?! that happens is speed racer?

its an american show about people racing cars, i've only seen a few episodes.

well did the thing that i just write happen in speed racer?

no no! Andayoh!

Andayoh?

no how we say it in korean.

oh, cool!

yeah...

Marissa. It would have been better advice if you told Alex how to drift. I explained how to do it in the first post. It would make more sense if you put that in instead.

lol, i made Alex a hot head.

i think stubborn people are funny. I just wait until they explode then laugh the whole time.

lol yeah!!!

should i extend my last post about dani?

no, i just haven't gotten around to commenting yet

i'll try to have bigger posts in the future.

no biggy. ill comment on it now.