Unknown Anonymity discussion

Hello Unknown Anonymity members! I think it may just be the fact that I'm joined to a few different groups made for writing, but I happen to know that everyone wants to publicize their writing, so post links here!

Plus, can you please not post your actual writing here? It drives me nuts to have to scroll past an extremely long chapter, even though I love that we are writing uber long chapters!

Anyway, this is a chance for everyone to get their writing out there, and get some reviews.

Ready? SET! GO!

Ok, yeah, so if you want help with your writing, you can post the link to your writing so we can view it and please tell us want you want us to help with. Names, places, how to spell, you know, that kind of stuff. My writing is lame, but if you want to look, this is one of them:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

You could just go to your friends, look at whoever's profile, scroll down, and there you can find their writing! =)

Rozara I put the think on here for my knew story, can u read the prologue of it?

Ok!

Here's a couple of chapters from a story I'm writing (very slowly). Comment porfavor?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

How's life?

Crazy. I'm so busy i haven't been on goodreads for at least a week.

yeah, i try to stay off, because i need to do homework.

The small car sped down the highway, toward its home. The man behind the wheel was sergeant John Thompson, who worked with the military scientists. He swerved onto the exit and raced toward his house. He threw himself out and-
"What is it honey?" asked his wife.
"We need to go NOW!! The military is after me. I am infected with the virus, they want to kill me!!" he screamed.
His wife Linda asked, "What virus?"
"I am infected Linda, get the kids and get them out of here NOW!!!" Sweat streamed down his face.
"Are you sure?"
"YES!!! GET THE KIDS AND GET THEM INTO THE CAR! THE MILITARY WILL BE HERE IN-" The screeching of tires.
Linda raced back into the house, grabbed the kids, packed several things and then she was ready. The kids were loaded into the car. John threw himself into the car, helped his wife in, and put the petal to the metal.
The car swerved around the corner, fish tailing the car, nearly hitting a nice looking Mercedes. Horns honked as the car sped- BAM! A sudden shotgun blast reverberated through the night.
"They are here!" A humvee was chasing after John and his family.
There was a chatter of machine gun fire as the soldiers manned the turret on top of the humvee.

i want some feed back how does this sound for u guys

Wow really good. You always start really good with super-action-packed beginnings=)

ikr?! thnk u

yeah, definitely action-packed beginning. What are you going to do with it? Are you going to continue or make it just a random scene?

idk i may continue it later
i started another story tho called bloodfather u shuld check it out

sure! sounds dark and scary! O.O

its not rlly scary
its like a scifi thing

its rlly cool lolz
(btw this is my new profile)
ji mei can maybe send me a couple of friend requests to me tht used to be my friends on my old profile?

u*

hmm? me confuzzled a little bit.

i added a random scene to my random scene thing... so check it out if you want! The similarities though were sooo unintentional. XP

kool

That's nice

you looked Rozara?

yeah

oh

I added something to one of my writing things.

kewl

not really

okay

I added a new writing piece! this one is random scenes of a dude and not a girl so don't get them mixed up!

Awesome! But I'll have to check it out later: Nanowrimo and all that.

I have another writing! you didn't look at the one I meant for you to look!

Oops dude I'm on the laptop at school next to my flute buddy emily/sen!!!

good for you?

yes

I put something new up on my writing.

OOO! Must go check.

Thanks!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

This is my story. It doesn't have a title yet.

I'll look at it!