Creative Writing discussion

The title says it all :)

oh my goodness. i got shivers.

I wanted to cry!!!!!!!!! but i really want to be the first one to comment on it!

If you are confused with my post, please know that Scarlet is being forced to write in that notebok. She must write about how it was back home from her point-of-you from a judge. Later on in the story, it will make sense.
Please, by all means, make up your own twists and turns to this story.

point-of-view*


and i totally got it. It's amazing.

really great story! its going to be a harder one to do though. more serious stuff

Yeaaa, I was hoping for that. But we all gotta take that serious stuff in...a lot of it has happened before. :(

saddly that is true. I am the happiest person ever! So writing stuff like that is a challenge. But it makes me think about how lucky i am.

it is very realistic

Thank you, S. (:

anytime marissa!

This story is depressing...
:(
and the last post I made isn't the end of it, by the way.

we know. It takes time to think of ideas. remember that. usually the first page is always the slowest part.

it's going to take me a little while to adjust to the serious writing

yes i agree, i will have to read a english or europian realistic fiction

i just can't to romantic stuff. Its terrible

i can sometimes, like if its a roleplay, and sometimes by myself, but i find myself trying to think of what i would draw... like a anime of it or something

I really like it...I mean I don't, its so terrible and such, but its really great :)

EMMA!!! <3
thanks for joining :)
and thanks for the nice comment.

MARISSA! <3
Haha, no prob.
You are very welcome.

yeah, you should post on it sometime!

My last post almost made me cry. I don't know how I put up with it all.

i must read!

readreadread.

the bathtub parts don't make much sense. Like i said she went up to take a SHOWER and then it went to taking a bath, and then i wrote she fell asleep in the tub, and woke up like an hour late, but then marissa said that the water was still running and overflowed. Wouldn't it had overflowed a long time ago if she fell asleep?

Idk, but i do find it hard to remember what is said, and what not. and its not that big of a deal. but just please read like the three posts before a post if you want to post, just to get an idea of what happened.

?? john, i think you could comment on TDAC now if you want..