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Jul 07, 2008 02:15PM
So, I have all of these great stories running around through my head. I sit down to write one of them but i don't get far cuz I get so caught up in telling myself the story that i cant concentrate on writing it. Does anyone have any tips on how i could slow myself down long enough to finish a book?
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Well, I work on the parts that are clearest in my head. If I get stuck at a certain part, but know what's going to happen next I'll write out the part I know and come back and connect it all later.
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Thats good advice guys! I will have to try it.
Oh yes, an outline. Make an outline - make it rather rough and just sketch out what happens, from beginning to end if you like. Depending on the length of your story and the detail of the outline, it probably won't take that long to jot all of the notes down - and it's fast. You can get places very, very fast. And then, after you finish your outline (and thus are done with telling your story) write out the book! Yay!
I have that problem, but I say go with what they say, because I usualy just end up giving up and telling myself the story for a bit, without ever writing anything down, and then forgetting it.
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outlines are good things to have, and i pretty much always do that so i dont forget what i wanted in the story (ever written somehting that you had ideas for how it would end, but by the time you got there, you had forgotten? its sad, but true) not to mention that when i make outlines, i can really just focus on the plot and not worry about characters or word choice for the moment. i can plan everything out and even take care of problems before they happen. not to mention if i have outlined the story i can leave it and then come back to it way later and keep it on topic and making sense.
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i dont usually outline, but sometimes i have an idea but i dont exactly have a solid plot yet, then i brainstorm using an out line
I thought that outlining was going to be boring before I did it . . . until i tried it. It was just like writing a story, but only writing down the basic stuff. Yay! That is teh awes0mness. =D
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my brother says may the cheese be with you.
haha, "metaphors be with you" is hilarius! that's amasing, i want one.
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OMG BRIGID I AM EXACTLY THE SAME WAY!!! I can't just write the basic idea, I need to think about every sentence before I write it; I chew every word before I spit it out, and I consider every option carefully before deciding which adjective to use. OMG I AM SUCH A PERFECTIONIST!! I can't just sit down and write everything in a rush; I have to make everything perfect. That's why it usually takes me HOURS and HOURS to write one chapter.
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Wow.......... I did an outline, and now I actually have a plot to follow for a story I'm writing! This works really well! Sorry, normaly I just start one with no idea of where I'm heading.
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i've started outlining my writing recently, and it actually really helps. ;D
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I outline in my head...helps for my series so I know how to foreshadow things...but honestly, I haven't outlined Beyond the Gates that much...only slightly
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foreshadow is so much fun!
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well, I think outlining does help. But for me, it never has. And i was always worried about that until recently when I heard Brandon Mull mention how his outlines are usually in his head. Yes yes! I thought.... that's me!!! For those of you who don't know, Brandon Mull is a fairly popular author of Fablehaven. I've personally never read them, but they are well loved in the area where I live and plenty of other areas I think.So what i'm trying to say is find what works for you. If writeen out outlines help you, great! If not, keep working on it. Some people can write out of order, but I have to write chronologically. If I don't, I get lost. Characters turn against themselves, and plots fall through.
Try different exercises where you outline. Maybe try just brainstorming and scrawling down a sentence or two about what you know you want to happen. Chew over everything in your mind until you find something that fits. Let the story be a part of you, but don't let it tell you who's boss. A novel can kick anyone's hind end... maybe try starting with smaller projects. That's my miniscule advice that probably won't work, but it's helped me a bit!
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Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. ><
(last edited Jul 21, 2008 04:03PM)
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*Dances* I like outlines!!! They work!!! At least, when I do them my way, the ones they do at school are just annoying........ Anyway. *Grins* Thanks! I'm going to stop going on and on now........
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hmmm... i almost never know how my book is going to end. somewhere in the middle i usually decide how it might end. the only ending i planned from just about the very beginning was the end to soul stealer...
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Yeah...for the morte i knew the basic idea of the ending since I started writing it...
do any of you do this: write the final copy of your essay for school, then go back and do a rough draft, and then an outline so you can get full credit? AND then you go back and revise again. I'm terribly guilty of this act, but my teachers seem to enjoy my essays well enough : ) ONly reason I got a 98% on my Science project (I did it literally the week before it was due and it was supposed to take a minimum of three months...) was because of the way I wrote it. : )
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oh dang it! : ) I was hoping I wasn't the only seriously confused and disorganized person out there. I think I've used this before, but..."I'm Creative; PLEASE tell me neatness doesn't count!"
hehe I agree to an extent. However, if my writing environment is a total mess, I find it harder to write. Just like I can't sleep if my room is a mess-- which is why I've had hardly any sleep in two days. : )
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