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I especially liked the beginning, it was really descriptive:

"A teardrop. It coursed down her cheek with the gentleness of a butterfly’s wing-stroke, caressing her smooth skin. Somehow it didn’t feel right to her. She wanted it to feel like an ache against her warm face, to feel dull and pain-filled, the way her heart felt."


I can never do something like that.

No way! I suck big time.

don't downgrade yourself buddy ;)

The Scary Monster's Buddy wrote: "I especially liked the beginning, it was really descriptive:

"A teardrop. It coursed down her cheek with the gentleness of a butterfly’s wing-stroke, caressing her smooth skin. Somehow it didn’t f..."

ikr! that's really good, btw!

welcome =]

ooh! I'll be sure to read! :)

this is awesome. i love how you wre able to capture two different personalities convincingly. Kat's thoughts are so heartfelt, i actually felt that tear drop on my own cheek in the opening paragraph. great job canter. hope there's more on the way