Elementals! discussion

I really want to remember this!!!!!!!!!!!!! one of my possible book names is RHEA I finally remembered!!!!

RHEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rhea? It is about...?

Rhea?? Does it have a deeper meaning than just the main character's name perhaps (I hope?)?? Such as an acronym or something? Red Happy Eggplants Attribute???

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hahaha it is the mother of zebus and that bunch. daughter of Gaia and Uranus. in greek mythology. I was going to name my earth prizon story's main character Rhea (but then I forgot, then remembered) and the guy naver or navid

navid.
zebus?
story?
avatar.... *growls*?

whoops, zeus, not zebus (typo) I made up naver/navid (still haven't decided which)it is fore my story

it has noithing to do with avatar

uhhh yes it does. prince zuko?? remember??

that is not the same person. and he isn't going to be a prince he is going to be the princes friend! Their fathers (the king and Naver's father) were friends and the king helped Naver's father to get appointed. he is like a right-hand man. The prince and Naver grew up together and are very close.

seems like a good book idea. Unlike faith, I don't critisize. *looks pointedly at faith, then picks up Fluffy and the bloody spork*

thanks (i think)

um, hi, I gues I haven't really got to know you...I was in a coma (thanks, faith, now I have to call it that)

anyway, I'm Isabel *offers hand* andI feel really akward writing this

should I delete that.... it sounds bad.....

Yeah, you think is right haha. It's a private joke between faith and I. Just wait for her to see it haha. UGH I need to plan book 2 of my series! grr.........

have you finished a whole book, ot just planing?

I finished a whole one. About the Elements, no duh haha.

hahahaha, u r fire right (ur pic) . I was going to write an elements book but then I was like...the words aren't coming out. I will probably start wirking on superhuman again....

Yuppedy yup yup. But I started it back when I was water, so the main character is an Aquarian.

oh, it is modern, superhuman is modern but my earth fire prison thingy was all medieval.

Mine is no where near modern haha. It's my own world- no technology like today. It's almost medeival.

I like the medieval more, it is much more interesting.

Yup. And, something about me, I can't write modern day. It's hard haha.

in superhuman I am doing it modern but they are really secluded. wow, I have forgotten how much I liked that darn story. I should write in it more, having it finished will be worth the headaches.

*grins* that's like my first book. I wanted it OVER because I had plans. Good plans for the end. I broke the writing rule, almost. I did something no author- i don't think- has ever, ever done. :)

hahaha *gasp* the most powerful laws of all!!!!! WOW you are like, going to be a souless person for ever, cursed to be ridiculed for not respecting the noble art of bleeding onto paper.

YUP! You wanna know the rule i broke?!

sure

you should know I am beaming because this is really funny and I am immensity proud of the before, which I am copying into a final draft.

First off, I am soulless haha. I'm a ginger. >oAnd so, the rule I broke? My book is in first person. At the end... I KILLED THE MAIN CHARACTER! while it was in first person.

what?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yup. Her name was Rivendale CLoude, Aquarian Princess, stolen by the Treefolk when she was 5. This book is when she's 15, and I killed her at the end.

omg that is like a twist, you have to be a real master to pull something like that off!

is it good, poetically cheesy (and I was ready to die because I had everything I had ever wished for)

or just cheesy (gasp choke faint die bio degrade)

*giggles* I'll copy it give me a second...

He held his hands over my neck, and I watched as air began swirling around his hands. He threw the ball of air over my neck, and I felt it slowly constrict my airways.
I tried to make the air around my neck become solid, but I couldn’t make it obey me. The Elusi was gone; I could feel it. Now it was simply me. Rivendale Cloude, princess of the Aquarians. It was as if the Treefolk had never even stolen me, as if I had remained at my home.
Derrek sneered. “You loose, Elusi. The war continues. Try again next time.”
And with that, he walked out of the Hollow, leaving me for dead.
I had failed. The Ilusi was now roaming loose in the world, and our world was at constant war. Lae and Blye would be divided from those who loved them, and the Treefolk would be trying to kill the Aquarians. That made me think of Blye killing Lae, and I quickly dismissed the image. Everyone would try to go after the Ilusi and try to kill him, desperate to stay together.
I could feel my mind blacking out and took the last little gasp I could manage. My mind completely blacked out, and I knew I had no chance of surviving. I could only hope that whoever that girl was, that she lived through Derrek’s wrath.
I had failed. And our world would pay significantly for it.

OMG * wipes tear* that was really good, very poetic, on the verge of cheese, but you drove it home with that final line that wiped out the soft cheese with a spicy mustard of finality. kudos

(now I am hungry)

your story sounds good, can I read it?

haha shuree. It's on my page... i think. Its longish.

what page?

me profile page.

k thanks, i will read it.

k.

i was going to read it now but I spent my whole day 9since three) reading another long story, like forty chapters, so I will read it later, and I still have to do algebra

eww algebra.... I hate algebra. B+ right now, and i'm an A student.

what grade are you in

8th, along with little miss Faithy here.

me too, what school?

I am on like, chapter three of your book

BVMS. And nice.

But very my sister...

Bermuda ovally middle school