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KELSIE NEED HELP!!! AND FAST :P
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Shayla
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Oct 03, 2010 03:55PM
I think it would be cool to have it like that.
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You could put the name of the person the perspective is in at the beggining of each chapter.
it got confusing for me, i actually stopped writing, brainstorming right now
if you like to challenge yourself then choose 2 otherwise, if you're a beginner do 1
Kelsie Marie Mellark (a.k.a Peeta's Wife) wrote: "ok now i need character names! HELP PLEASE :D"Bob and Lola.
Okay, sorry. Being serious now.
Ummm.....what are your characters like?
Yes, put up their descriptions in the character section along with what your story is about.
Kelsie Marie Mellark (a.k.a Peeta's Wife) wrote: "ok now i need character names! HELP PLEASE :D"What do they look like?
Yes, like I said before, looks, characteristics, the topic of your story, what it's about, and so on in the character section, trust me you'll get a lot of help.
**Try not to copy anyone's story or characters, everything posted on goodreads is copyrighted, so you may be accused**
**Try not to copy anyone's story or characters, everything posted on goodreads is copyrighted, so you may be accused**
Nice...Girl's name...Girl: Ora: Meaning Gold http://www.babynology.com/meaning-ora...
Boy: Ace: Meaning Unity http://www.babynology.com/meaning-ace...
Okay.Girl: Shianne or Cheyenne
Boy: Dustin
Whoa, picky. Then again, so am I when it comes to names. But I really like Cheyenne and Dustin. :P
Okay so Cassidy and Dustin? That sounds cool....
Swiftfire wrote: "What's it about?"Yeah, what Swifty said!
Soooo, Dustin's a creeper, eh? lol Just kidding :)
hey kel :) luv interests? i dont know. it depends on what happens between them... their connection? r u flipping between POV? (btw i have read a book that flips POV- Shiver and it wasnt confusing at all so you should be able to pull it off as long as you lable which character's POV you are using)
Jen wrote: "hey kel :) luv interests? i dont know. it depends on what happens between them... their connection? r u flipping between POV? (btw i have read a book that flips POV- Shiver and it wasnt confusing ..."I read part of one, it was confusing...Flipped
but which point of view? both or just one? and i read flipped too i forgot it flipped between POV as well
If can keep up with it then write two.
You should put:Chapter 1:
Dustin
(Chapter...)
Chapter 2
Cassidy
Or in what ever order
you could use different fonts to tell the difference :D or instead of writing dustin and cassidy out each chapter you could post a symbol representing who is spaeking.
Ex: Cassidy- heart (grl)
dustin- sport thingy (boy)
but make it something having to do with the book!
How about Kielxine? It's pronounced (Kelseen) but it's spelled kinda weird.
Kelsie Marie Mellark (a.k.a Peeta's Wife) wrote: "QUICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!give me a girl's name in your school that you hate!!!
Ready? GO!!!!!"
Sydney Benfeild!
or...
Katie Molder...
ohhhh question *raises hand to be picked*think: does switching POV absolutely NEED to be done in order to make the story better, does it enable you to see something you cant otherwise?, does it make the story clearer by switching?, do the events ping-pong back and forth? or is it the same expirences happening to them (are they in same place/time)?, do they meet other ppl and have important conversations with them while the other character is doing something important?. WHY do you want to switch?- to be different?/unique?
ok then i would switch POV. i just wanted to make sure it made sense for you to switch :D
well, if your r saying they are 16 then... *does math calculations* 10th grade would be the correct grade (15-16 in 10th and 16-17 in 11th).
