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umm yeah..so Harley wanted me to share the story i wrote Lol... here it is .. =P




I have never been more grateful to my drama teacher ever before.If not because of her,i'd have never been able to pull this act off...,
Covered in my blanket, I wondered how could my brother sleep so peacefully when Dad kept on honking in annoyance without a
single pause!!Mom and Dad are going to a stupid party where all they have to do is hold their glasses of boose in different poses and
show off about everything they own...I could hear my mom and Miss Andrea,our nanny, talking about how gorgeous my mom's dress
is..And finally,when my mother was sure that she looked perfect, she decided to leave.. Oh, not to forget the accustomed advice she
showers on Miss Andrea each time she's leaving us alone with her..
"Use the numbers i left near the phone in case of any emergencies!!"
And exactly after 12.5 seconds, the honking stopped!!!

It is my best friend, Kim's birthday party tonight and I'm going to sneak out...(Yeah, now you get it...the purpose of my act of sleeping)
Kim is my senior in school but still a year behind her age-fellows... YES!! She failed.. But it happens to everyone atleast once in their
life, right? No big deal!! So well, as much as my parents were more than happy to tell people that one of the richest men in town's
daughter is their daughter's best friend, they were conservative enough to disallow me from attending late night parties.
And anyways, imagining them just thinking about what it would be like if i was at a late night party dancing with the rich, spoiled
yahoo's of town was embarassing enough for me, letting them KNOW was way ahead.
Miss Andrea was sure that me and my brother were asleep, i could hear the voice of a different channel after every 2 seconds..Oh so,
Gossip Girls is the stop..Good, that she is busy with something she's obsessed with..I was walking back and forth in the balcony of my
room, waiting for Andrea and just when i felt like
I witnessed a shadow of someone the telephone ring startled me.. I jumped back into my bed hiding under the blanket..
DAMN!! Why was Kim calling?! I picked up the phone making sure Miss Andrea didnt realise that she wasnt the only one hearing the
caller's voice ... It sounded like a drunkard's voice which scared the very core of myself.. His laugh was insane and...freaky in other words
Miss Andrea asked who he was and he replied,
"There were three little piggies.Oh what fun!Two were disembowelled,then there was one"
The voice cracking at places, sounded evil and menacing.. "Go to hell !! " Miss Andrea yelled,slamming down the reciever.
Staying with the drunkard ALONE, even in a phone call was too scary for me.. So, I hanged up as well. A few minutes and shivers passed
and the phone rang again.. Miss Andrea must be smoking by now to calm herself down. But what shall I do to calm myself down?
I couldnt decide and I picked up the reciever, trying to be strong enough to hear his..his voice..
The slow, gruff voice commenced, " I know you're alone and I'm gonna get you!You hear? Get you! Get y..."
I was too chicken to hear him finish the sentence...I slammed the reciever onto the cradle and hid under my blanket.. I was shivering with
fear when I heard a knock on my balcony's door.. Oh my God!! Is he going to kill me and my brother before Andrea?What should I do?
If not for myself, I have to be strong to protect my little brother atleast..I'll fight him.. with...with the flower vase? No, my Dad's gun which
must be in the second drawer of his cupboard.. YES!! I'll go run for the gun first and then kill this drunkard !! And then I heard another
knock .. Since when do killers ask for permission to kill you?
Oh well, this is good if he's waiting for my permission..I can get the gun before he comes in..I shoved off my blanket to go to my Dad's
room but I realised it was Kim who was knocking,not the killer !!
A sudden rush of relief ran through me but my expressions left Kim blank... I tried to compose my expressions and waved her in ...She
greeted me,hugged me .. and asked me to make it quick... I couldnt think .. I needed a few seconds alone to figure out what I should do..
I asked her to excuse me for a few minutes and went to the bathroom .. I washed my face and started thinking...
Miss Andrea wasnt safe..and she was in our home so WE were not safe as well .. Forget about me, I hate my life anyway, but my little
brother.. His life didnt even start yet.. I cant leave him alone here...Miss Andrea is a nice girl and I cant leave her alone as well..
Even if it was a prank call, I cant ignore it.. I love my brother much more than that !! I was sneaking out anyway,right?Why dont I ask Kim
to drop us at the police station ..we could file a complaint and call my parents from there..Yess!! This will work!! It has to work!!

I washed my face again..The water always helped to calm me down..While I was washing my face i heard a weird small voice..like sumone
was going to say something but stopped midway...I have to be very careful now..What if the killer is already in the house? I peeked through
the hole in my bathroom's door and what I saw made me wish that I was dead before watching all of this .. He.. He was here.. in my room
cutting my friend to pieces.. I could see her head two steps away from her body lieing on the floor.. A gulp of guilt raised in my throat..
My best freind was dead... on her birthday...because of me...Tears flooded in my eyes..and I put a hand on my mouth so that he doesnt hear
my voice... My thoughts were filled with emotions...I reminded myself that my brother was in the room and I should stay calm in order to
save him..It is the least I can do...STAY ALIVE to SAVE HIM and Miss Andrea!! Was Miss Andrea dead already? IF not,then did she know
that the killer was in our house, in my ROOM!! It doesnt really matter now.. Since we'll be dead either way.. I was about to unlock the
door when I heard someone puking...Was it my brother? my little brother? Did he see his sister's best friend shredded to bloody pieces
on the floor? NO! I couldnt allow him to see that..He was too young for this...I unlocked the door in a hurry ...the killer was covered in
black clothes...he was wearing a black mask..I couldnt see his face.. I forced myself not to look at my best friends "pieces"..Instead I shot
a glance towards my bed where my brother was sleeping...The vision froze me...My brother was already dead...He was not the one who
was throwing up...It was Miss Andrea .. who was standing at the door of my room...helpless..defeated..on the floor...Again..my thoughts
were clouded with emotions... The killer didnt chop my brother to pieces...He just ripped his head off his throat...
I had no one to live for now .. My brother was the only family member I loved and adored..He is dead now and I have no one to live for..
I ran to Miss Andrea trying to help her stand.. When she was able to stand,I whispered in her ear .. "Keep him distracted,i'll be back"
The killer was watching in amusement...I could picture him smiling coz of the twinkle in his eyes...I ran to my parent's room opened the
cupboard , took out the gun and ran back to my room ... As soon as I reached.. the killer said "Oh Baby...where did you go..I missed you"
which assured me that he hasnt noticed the gun in my hand,hiding behind my back, yet.
He had Miss Andrea's neck his hands..he was about to chop her head off as well ..Before he could do that i loaded the gun behind my
back...I distracted him by asking a question .. "Can i be allowed to do something?"
and he replied with that twinkle in his eyes.. "Ofcourse honey, as long as it doesnt kill me" and he barked out that same menacing laugh..
The shooting lessons with dad were going to pay off tonight..I walked two steps forward... cutting down the distance between him
and myself to three steps... and then I shot him in his head.
I loaded the gun again and shot again... I did this three more times..to make sure he was dead!!
I fell to the ground then.... Miss Andrea was horrified with what I had done.. I couldnt do anything else but cry...
The next thing I remember after the murder was that i woke up in a hospital .. My mother and Miss Andrea were around me ...
I couldnt help but cry and try to convince my Mom that I killed him just for the sake of revenge...I'm not even sure how i got all the
strength for it.. I just did it.. I did it for my brother and my best friend and I'm not ashamed of it !! My mother calmed me down and said
that she understands ..She also told me that the court is not going to punish me because the case was about self-defense..I'm on my way
to the cemetry now.. May my brother and best friends' souls rest in peace!!

shall i delete it ? =S

Havent read it yet but once I do Ill definetly let you know what I think..it may get a few more views if you post it under the writers corners though. Just a thought

I thought about that.. but then i thought...i donno what... Lol

lol...Cant wait to read it...for now..Im off to do homework

I'm not gonna be able to sleep tonight

Vivi wrote: "I'm not gonna be able to sleep tonight"

Loooooool...
Sorryyy!!! =P
but my teacher gave me that outline, i just modified it alot!! =P