Writers Unite discussion

These are my characters for the story I am writing. PLEASE don not steal them. That much I must stress.

Tell me what you guys think of them!

Character #1
Name: Lander (Feld name: Aster)
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Appearance: Long, straight light blond hair, partially tall, thin, pale, deep blue eyes, has a tattoo on the nape of her neck.
Personality: Impatient, fierce, does not take no for an answer, stubborn, determined, sneaky, sweet, a bit of a rebel, can be quiet when worried or anxious, can be shy.
History: Parents died, is an orphan.

Character #2
Name: Jude
Gender: Male
Age: 17, almost 18
Appearance: Hair the color of mixed gold, chocolate, and charcoal, tall, gangly but muscular, silver liquid eyes.
Personality: A bit quiet, hard to get on his good side, fighter, refuses to fall in love, gets angry easily, show off, brave, stubborn, conceited, can be a jerk.

Character #3
Name: Blu
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Pitch black hair, tall, wiry, blind on one eye, other eye the color of an orange, muscular.
Personality: Smiles a lot, happy most of the time, good fighter, almost the total opposite of Jude, can be moody.
History: Brother of Jude

Character #4
Name: October
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Appearance: Red hair, coal black eyes, very tall, muscular, heavily built.
Personality: Loud, obnoxious, sarcastic, protective
History: Raised by grandmother

Character #5
Name: Lani (Feld name: Ash)
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Appearance: Bleach blond hair, rosy lips, short, thin, grey brown eyes with pink flecks.
Personality: Snobby, mean, loud, feisty, has a mini poodle
History: Unknown

Character #6
Name: Simmer
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Appearance: Strawberry blonde hair, brown eyes, very small, wears many rings, lots of scars on her face
Personality: Sweet, very quiet, shy
History: Won't say...

Cool! Which story is this from?

I haven't started writing it yet, but its from a book I am starting to write called Feld.

these characters sound real frickin' awesome. can't wait to read what you write

Kelsie Marie Mellark (a.k.a Peeta's Wife) wrote: "ok Aster sounds exactly like my friend's older sister!!! I swear!!!!"

haha, that's strange


T-Rose wrote: "these characters sound real frickin' awesome. can't wait to read what you write"

Thanks!!!