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I LOVED your first chapter, Esme! It totally set me up for the next chapter which I also thoroughly enjoyed :D
I've read all of it... keep me updated on ur posts :) cnt wait for more
Yayy!! Thnk u!! Should I write a chapter mow?
Ok. But might take about 28 mins lol cuz thts how long it took last time
Eh Amina how many chapters did ya read? Cuz I wrote 8 chaps
i donno. post the link... i think i've read 6 chaps.
Lol wait: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...u know whts easier tht when u finish reading the full chapter and when u reach the end at the right side it say "next chapter" click tht :)
Sooooo did ya like it? It's a short chapter I know cuz I couldn't think of more to write.
So did u get who I meant when I said "they're here" *mystery sound affect* lol
Though if it's a right guess I want u to delete it cuz I don't want others to know if they haven't read it.
Lol great. I need to change that cuz then it won't sound so shocking
I wrote chapter 10 cuz i'. Not sure if I'll come online tomorow so here the link and u can read it if u like:http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
When you think life is ok, but not great, things do get worse. You can never imagine what life can be if you are destined to be spending eternity with an immortal. Marissa is a daughter of a high and rich family that are owners of their
territory. Along with Marissa comes her older twin sisters,
Nora and Ella who love her and always have been with her through every difficulty. Then second comes her brother,
Johnathan who is outgoing, kind and always there when
needed. After a big disaster hit Marissa, she then
always been guarded with full security. But when the handsome and irresisitable Damen Enigmar, son of a very powerful family comes to an important meeting and an unexpected surprise, thing get twisted for Marissa who never liked Damen. Damen
has seemed to change from the last two years. He is as pale as white chalk and more harsh then he ever has been. Damen has no sympathy for Marissa. She is just some slave in his eyes, that you can't help but take advantage of. But at the end things get into a major twist.
if you like this and would wish to read more here's the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
hope you enjoy and pls leave a comment. Thnks a lot!!! :)