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Yup, give us a short review or sumthing

It's definitely an intriguing title. Bottom line, I'd read something with that title.

yep me too. sapphire of magic sounds really cool :)

Shyla had just woken up from sleep, when she heard her father running up the stares of the castle.
- from 'her' sleep, u mean?
- u got the stares rong. it shld be stairs

She sighed and got up from her bed and opened up a small box up a shelf and took it down.
- The end of this setence doesn't make sense.

-If u paragraph this, seperating the dialogue, it'll be easier to read :)
- I love the name Evilfar!
- That end sentence abt LOTR cartoon, I thot it was part of the stry :P lol
- over all, real cool. I'd like to read more

yep, thas exaclty what I mean :)

well do post the stry soon, I rly wanna read more :)

okay, good luck :)

I love that name...Aloria
so pretty