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Paige
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Nov 18, 2010 03:25PM
Ok, I have a question. Is Olive 7 in the flashback? He seems older than that. but other than that, it's a really good start and I can't wait to read more! :)
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abby....this is wonderful. so heartfelt, so real...i can't quite put my finger on a better way to describe it verbally, but i feel emotionally fuzzy and sad and...a whole bunch of other things. you are quite talented. the story is beautifully written. the personalities you've crafted here are original. the dialogue is spot. the atmosphere is languid yet engaging. i just couldn't get enough. please please please post more before i die. i promise that i will if you don't
hey no problem. and i understand about the block. we all get them here and there *winks* but please do hurrrrrryyyyyy!!!

