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message 1: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) Ok, I have a question. Is Olive 7 in the flashback? He seems older than that. but other than that, it's a really good start and I can't wait to read more! :)


message 2: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) ok, thanks!


message 3: by Paige (new)

Paige (thewordshakermockingjay) I really like this chapter and hope you continue more soon!


message 4: by Rosalyn (new)

Rosalyn Leigh (batistebespeaks) abby....this is wonderful. so heartfelt, so real...i can't quite put my finger on a better way to describe it verbally, but i feel emotionally fuzzy and sad and...a whole bunch of other things. you are quite talented. the story is beautifully written. the personalities you've crafted here are original. the dialogue is spot. the atmosphere is languid yet engaging. i just couldn't get enough. please please please post more before i die. i promise that i will if you don't


message 5: by Rosalyn (new)

Rosalyn Leigh (batistebespeaks) hey no problem. and i understand about the block. we all get them here and there *winks* but please do hurrrrrryyyyyy!!!


message 6: by Rosalyn (new)

Rosalyn Leigh (batistebespeaks) okay let me know when you post it. i haven't been online lately myself hehe


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