~!Life Rox!~ discussion

Here we do the brainstorming for story #1.

We need a name for the story & a name for the girl .

Name for story...i dunno

Name for girl: Sabrid

i agree with Serena, before we make the name it helps if we come up, with the story first.

ya...exactly

when i write all my stories, good or bad, i just write, using temporary names, then i change them later...

yes, i agree with Serena, you can always change the name.

thnk u!

I agree too! tho we have a name now!

all right..whteva...so the title is

IN A HEART'S BEAT

is that it?

ya or IN A HEART BEAT

cool....but then HEART BEAT would have to be ONE WORD....then it sounds like a song i hear once....

okay then we should stick with your idea then. i love the story so far!

can i pitch in??? (even tho i already did)

so whats the story line then?

Just write! Tha's fun! we have no idea what'll happen next , or a completely different idea. Then someone else adds something & the whole thing changes.It's cool! We somehow complete eachother's ideas!

so far the story is very scary, i can't wait to see what else we can come up with. Some one write on it, and fast!! It's so good!

there should be romance... i mean it IS called in a heart's beat after all!

i dont think thats the way this story's headed. maybe the next one.

she could die in a heart's beat... jkjk!

hm...ya...the whole thing could be over this brad guy i wrote about in the story

Hello everybody,

The four essentials to a story are theme, plot, characterization, and style.

Brainstorm about the theme first, then the plot. Integrate them. Then discuss characterization and style. These four must be integrated.

For more detailed info, see this topic in the Happy and Brainy group: For Fiction Writers (aspiring, new, or accomplished).

Have fun.

No, I agree with Gunjari, there should be some past life love, maby they both loved Brad?

2 late for that now. anyway, brad was sabrid's cousin. ew.

ya uhh huh....

ya your right, at least thre was some kind of love in the story. I really like the story alot, someone write in it please.

:) :)

brad... he should just be the hottie luv of both girls... no cousins...

NO RELATIVES IN THE STORY... it's just better that way....

ya agree with Serena, NO RELATIVES!!!!!!!!!!!

K! let's finish thisone , this is what we're going on with , then we will have 2 endings.

but its been said!

yep!

okay, I am very excited about this book! it's so very interseting.

how about, sabrid has unknown powers, and the two girls battle it out, and sabrid wins, and that mean girl flies over the edge of a cliff and dies, then brad was never dead, and he comes back, and dates sabrid... happily eva after!

that's tooo random , i'm not in the mood for a happy ending!!!

i want erran to date sabrid!

i do agree with serena i think that this book should have a happy ending.

erran dating Sabrid is somehow like twilight! He can read minds & is stunningly beautiful & Sabrid goes blushing!!!BTW I don't disagree! I want them dating too!
And an IDEA i've got! Anissa went insane , had a fight with her Brad & then killed him & from that moment she didn't get well , until her mind went balnk! before this blank mind thingy happens , she had got the memory into sabrid's mind to make others think she loved brad & she didn't kill'im & some other person did!

omg that's a great idea! except it's kinda too late cause we already added a bit that totaly wouldn't go with that... darn.

ummm that ain't too late! They can be mistaken , 'cuase they can't think of annisa doin' this & they think anissa loved Brad , they think someone else has done it & the only person they can think of is tha uncle...

as long as erran and sabrid r together, im good.

am good with that too. but do you guys want to be that Brad did the mind thing beacuse he didn't want her to feel bad, but he never that she would avenge him, so just in case he put it her mind.

Brad did nothing...Anissa just killed brad & moved the memory to sabrid's mind.

ya that sounds cool

but that's not annissa's power... maybe she has two, which made her unstable? which is why she's like this!
so when they confront the brother guy they realize they have the wrong person.
hey, what's keith's bro's name? i don't know!

either do i, i forgot. please add on to the story.

have we mentioned his name at all? i'll take a look...

I don't think so!
I wonna add sumthin' & i dunno if i sould pick a name for him , or not!does he already hav a name ?????????????????
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no he doesn't.

Well, i've already forgotten that thing i wonned to add!

should we just delete it? cause no one's adding... :(

I lost track of it this time. If we were 2 do another 1, I promise I WILL keep track of it, and post 2 it on a fairly regular basis.

but i really like it! we can finish it!