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Dec 07, 2010 07:38PM
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Okay i had nothing to do today(bunked college yet again) and i was sitting in the park when this one just came to me.THE DOVE
The soaring sky beheld a sight,
Far above any mortal's might.
In the blue expanse stretching above,
I sighted a sweet little dove.
Symbol of peace flying carefree,
Perching from tree to tree.
There it was, spreading the message of love,
In this unruly world the sweet little dove.
Its fearless flight spoke louder than words,
That wars and violence are absurd.
It loved its freedom far above,
And tried to guard it, the sweet little dove.
Soon it disappeared from sight,
Gone someplace else to stop a fight.
Mankind might not heed its message of love,
But it didn't give up, the sweet little dove.
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I <3 it!Aurora Borialice
The stars
shine in my eyes
like angels
or demons
The sky is
dark
all around them
i smile
the cold ticles me
The leaves rustle
reminding me of my friend
i miss them
come home
i think
come home
by the stars
remember the stars
the we played under
that we dreamed under
because when i look at them
all i see
think
breath
is You
And i miss the way they looked
when you were here
so come home
from the
Aurora Borialice
As dusk sets,my heart rests.
Safe for the day,
Tomorrow? Can't say.
Stealthy and quiet,
yet I can hear it.
Lurking, hiding in the darkness
Feeding on carcus.
I fear it today,
and the fear will stay.
Friends
They don't understand,
They're to wrapped up in
Their own little world.
They watch the days go by,
Never once stopping
To look behind,
Never once stopping
To realize my pain,
Never once stopping
To try and understand.
They look at me strangely
As I try to explain,
They don't bother
To understand
My inexplicable cries.
And now,
I'm hiding.
They never stop
Their senseless chatter,
And I'm hiding from them,
My so-called friends.
Thanks John! Yeah getting the last two lines to rhyme was the whole purpose Glad you noticed....
Just cos it's Christmas...Bells
Ding... Dong...
Ding... Dong...
A bell sings.
Children laugh.
Ding... Ding..
Ding... Dong...
The bell,
Large and strong,
Singing its wonderous song,
The wonderful shell.
Ding... Dong...
Ding... Ding...
Snowflakes fall,
The children's laughter
growing louder and crisper,
Just how the snowflakes fall, fall, fall.
Dong... Dong...
Ding... Dong...
The ground shakes,
Only once,
Lost in the absense,
Of horrid panic.
Ding... Dong...
Ding... Dong...
A deafening sound,
Of utter horror,
And the bell falls,
Its final ring,
Lost in the blizzard of screams.
O.O I've read it before and I still got goosebumps
:D That brings a smile to my face.It really shouldn't, though.
fingernailscut
blow
wait.
white
thin
pink
swell.
write
with it
read
them once
because
they'll fade.
no knives,
just fingers
causing their
own world
of pain
one word
to describe
the feeling
of longing:
addiction
that is scary.... <_>I sit and drift off into my own world again.
A twisted memory of a light day.
The cherry blossoms smell like they always do.
I smile at the smell. Sakura.
My friend waves to me, then attacks me with his sword.
I laugh and block with my force field power.
His brother comes from behind on the rope.
Then stops because we find a cattipiller
Its so fuzzy.
I laugh because it smells like Sakura.
Then the swords are gone.
And the brothers too.
And the friends are gone.
And i talk to you.
and i smell.
I smell.
The Sakura.
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TogetherWe'll be together.
Just like always.
Best friends.
Forever and ever.
Let's jump together
Into the night
Where everything seems to be better.
Let's watch the dancing flames
And play with fire
And watch them burn
Let's take a knife
And turn it over
in our hands.
And draw with crimson lines.
Let's play together,
And mark our arms with soft reminders.
And watch them fade
And mark them once again.
Let's take a pill,
Or maybe few,
And sleep forever
And ever.
We're together
Forever and ever.
Best friends
Always together.
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I'll take that as a compliment...?
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She can correct me if im wrong.
I take the "horrid" part as a compliment. That was part of the point. But the "sick" part, I'm a little iffy on.
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no, it was a compliment! i do not mind dark things!! I saw saying how it made me feel...
Ah. I see. Thank you~
Him.He
and I
go hand in hand.
He
and I
are two different things.
He
can't speak
and I
speak for him.
He
says I
should silently cry.
He
says I
should fall away.
Go far
Away.
He
says I
am weaker than all.
Which
i am
i don't
deny.
He
tells me
that i
am dumb
so stupid
so naive
and demanding.
He
tells me
that i am a child.
He
tells me
that i
am worthless.
Which
i am
i cant
deny.
He
claimed i
as his own
and tormented
and taunted
and terrified
me.
He
claimed i
did hell
to myself.
He
claimed i
stood and did nothing
as she cried.
which
i did
i know
i did.
He
knows i
did nothing
He
knows i
know nothing
He
knows i
can say nothing
He
knows i
am nothing
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...Burning.
Burn.
Fire.
Play.
With.
God
damn.
Fire.
And.
Write.
Effed.
Up.
Words.
On.
Your.
Skin.
Un
til.
You.
Scream.
Or.
Not.
Just.
Watch.
It.
Burn.
Un
til.
You.
Can't.
Take.
It.
An
y
more.
Well.
Hell.
You.
Might.
Think.
That's.
Screwy.
But.
He.
Says.
It's.
All.
Just.
Fine.
And.
Dandy.
And.
His.
Judg
ment.
Over
rides.
Yours.
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It was meant for emphasis, but I see your point.
Hello, I'm Jude Henderson and here's a poem of mineTitle: Forever
Genre: Poetry/Romance
Description: When you are scared to say forever. . . i think it's at best not to see with your eyes, but with you heart ♥
Forever - Poem
She covers her eyes
and avoids to see.
She whispers his name
in dreams, in her sleep.
She takes his hand
and presses it to her cheek.
She tells him the words
she’s too afraid to speak.
He listens to her patiently
and loves her with every touch.
‘Forever’ he says
‘Forever’ she says.
She covers her eyes
and begins to see.
By: JH
This is just an example of what I do, so, please check my Goodreads page for more =)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...
Another one of mineTitle: Fall
Genre: Poetry/Romance
Description: Falling in love is hard...
Fall
The tree shades
down its leaves for spring;
She gazes outside
to watch the leaves
fall down to the grass
and make it soft
for the fall that comes
for the two of us.
As I gaze in your eyes
and you swim into mine
I can’t help but wonder,
What will it happen
when the last leave falls?
Will our bridge in the ground
be strong enough for the both of us?
She gazes outside
to watch the tree,
The tree shades its leaves
just in time for spring.
By: JH
This is just an example of what I do, so, please check my Goodreads page for more =)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...
And here's one more:Title: Red Ribbons
Genre: Poetry/Drama
Description: Its pretty itself explanatory.
Red Ribbons
She sees her
Soft white skin,
The soft blue veins
That mark a way
Beneath her skin
In her pale white wrist,
She feels her pulse
It’s pressure underneath,
Almost like it’s someone
Who wants to scream,
She traces lines to
Relieve the pain,
She holds in her hands
Her deadly reflection,
And traces her lines
Again and again,
She extends her arm
For everyone to see,
To show the world
Those dark red ribbons
That adorn her sleeve,
Those simple lines that
Caused the pain,
Those beautiful ribbons
That released the pain.
And only to realize
That the ribbons in her sleeve. . .
They belong to me.
Only to realize
That the girl with red ribbons.
That girl is me.
By: JH
(view spoiler)
This is just an example of what I do, so, please check my Goodreads page for more =)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...
Title: White Red RoseGenre: Poetry/and something else
Description We all want to change, at some point in our lives, we need it. But changing, always comes with a price.
White Red Rose
There’s a white rose beneath my window.
Its petals pose in this winter cold,
Of dying wishes and desperate hopes.
My hand gently moves toward the cold white rose,
Until I realize its filled with a million thorns.
A sting in my hand, a deep red pain,
Running blood that falls upon the white red rose.
There’s a red rose beneath my window,
Its petals shine in the golden light,
Of living dreams and freshly hopes.
My hand gently moves toward the now red rose.
The beautiful rose gazes outside in this winter cold,
Though she feels safe and warm
Inside my hands, that have now become the newly home
Of the pure red rose
By: JH
(view spoiler)
This is an example of what I do, so, please check my Goodreads page for more =)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...
He in the Songi sit at the piano
i stare at the keys
black and white
i can hear it playing
before i play
just like she tells me
how to practice.
as i stare
He whispers to me
that voice
in the back of my mind.
He says, predicts
what could
possibly go wrong.
so i play
and He messes with
my fingers that play.
so i blame Him.
but once more
i am proven wrong.
He cannot control
my fingers that play.
only i
have that power
by which
i cannot control.
Sweetly swingingSweetly i swing
whoosh whip
i lean back
whoosh whipp
i love the smell
whoosh whoosh
of the the grass and pines
whoosh whip
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...He's already
pushing
me. Why are
you
helping Him? You're drifting
away.
You're moving far
from
me, to somewhere I don't know. And
me?
I just might leave too.
Makes
me feel sick inside.
Everything
makes me
feel
strange inside. Like I'm
wrong.
Like everything's
wrong.
silenceis
not
golden.
is
not
welcome.
is
not
wanted.
is
not
good
for
my
head
ing out
to where
i hope for
somewhere
i can finally
scream.
*inspired by SHINee*Love
can't be caged
or it dies
Loved
cannot be tied down
or traped
If you tie me down and trap me
Then the love is also tied down
The future is also tied down
It can’t grow anymore
Freely empty yourself and look at me
I’ll fill you only, I’ll completely fill you only
Don't tie me up
or trap me down
or all i see is
an angelic crown
Loverholic Robotronic
Loverholic Robotronic
Dont' tie me down
Don't trap me up
Don't capture me
because
now
i
am
free
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...Sometimes,
you forget
all of the
world
when you
look up at
the branches
and leaves.
But then
you look
down
and see
the sidewalk
under your
feet.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
hey there lovely
you've gone all pale
eyes bleak and bland and black and
dead.
should you be out there
dead
in the sun?
or should you be here
dead
to them?
sorry honey you've gone
all trash. maybe it's better
for you to say your goodbyes.
throw out the ideas stop
being something else. because
sweetheart you're
not.
~§~
stop
stop drawing those little things
singing those ridiculous songs.
stop dancing those dances
you know you're all wrong.
stop staring at a screen
attempting some stranger's rhapsody.
stop trying to be good about it
because you're chatting with nobody.
stop it child
you're being somebody else.
stop it child
you're nobody else.
wow!! thats reallly good!! It's totally the truth!!
