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message 1: by Meadow ~, Luna, The one who's going to fail to murder Blackthorn. (new)

Meadow ~ (lunahexmoon) | 401 comments Mod
heres where all the enemies who have fallen shall rest


message 2: by Ashok (new)

Ashok Satpathy (Asubakachan) | 43 comments *Walks in and sits on a old gravestone* (idk who..but alas lets pretend)
*looks around the dim area and sighs*
"ahhhh soo relaxing"


message 3: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
"I don't think they'll like that you're sitting on their grave. Quite disrepective, if you ask me." Blackthorn called out silently from a tree branch, her legs swinging.


message 4: by Ashok (new)

Ashok Satpathy (Asubakachan) | 43 comments *looks up*
"Ohh right....Wait why are you in that dead tree?"
(oohh evil time)
"Ahh i knew you we're part squirell"
*looks proud of his evil comment*


message 5: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (last edited Dec 30, 2010 02:18PM) (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
(lol)

Blackthorn blinked a couple times, completely not getting his joke. She then shook it off and jumped down.

"I was enjoying a peaceful moment...well, peaceful enough. Not many people come here, you know? But why are you here? Your not one of those necromancers, are you? I've met a couple before...you don't look like it."


message 6: by Ashok (new)

Ashok Satpathy (Asubakachan) | 43 comments ((hehehehe ^.-))
"Hmmm Nope. I have nothing to do with those dark dark art.... Raise the dead..Bah...No my dear...I am here to be at peace ^.^"


message 7: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
Raven stopped outside the cemetery gates and closed her eyes. The air around her shimmered and then she vanished. Invisibility. She made her way past Blackthorn and Asako, heading towards the graves in the back of the cemetery.

"I have to practice," she murmured softly to herself.
"But it's so crude...should I?"


message 8: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
"Hi Raven." Bianca muttered quietly after the invisible girl, rolling her eyes at her obvious attempt to be unoticed.
Her thoughts were loud enough to wake a mama bear in hibernation.

Bianca craned her neck, momentarily forgetting that she wouldn't be able to see Raven. She swore and jumped out of the tree, waving a good-bye to Ashok.

She then tried to follow the thoughts, a hard thing to do, and ended up crashing into multiple trees and tripping over bushes.

"Maybe i should keep my eyes open..." She considered, swatting away mosquitoes. "Lack of concentration isn't that bad."


message 9: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
Raven sat down in front of a grave. She turned her head sharply as she heard the crunching of twigs behind her, but oddly she saw no one.

"Imagination?" she asked herself. Raven shook her head and turned her thoughts back to the person lying beneath the dirt.

"I can't," Raven murmured to herself, putting her head in her hands. "It's not...right."


message 10: by Meadow ~, Luna, The one who's going to fail to murder Blackthorn. (new)

Meadow ~ (lunahexmoon) | 401 comments Mod
(dramatic scene :O cool)


message 11: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (last edited Jan 03, 2011 03:53PM) (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
The corners of fallen leaves were twitching, and if held down from rustling away.
Those leaves were situated in front of some old grave.
She smiled in a way that a cat would smile if it caught a mouse.

"Found you..." Bianca mused, trying to listen in on what Raven was thinking.

All of the things she said gave no clues away.
Bianca swore loudly, and in an instant her hand was clamped over her mouth.

Yeah, good job, Bianca. Just let yourself be spotted. Again she swore, but this time more quietly, at the same time praying to the gods that Raven didn't hear her.


message 12: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((cup of tea? REALLY RENE?! you would do something like that...))

Raven sat, torn between doing what she had came to do or not. She got up and gean pacing back and forth.

((how do u go from italics to regular? i cant get tht. if i put it in italics then it stays that way))


message 13: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((You know what you type to start it, the two triangular things with the i in it, but then do the same thing but with a dash in front of the i))


message 14: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (last edited Jan 03, 2011 04:32PM) (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
(( ooooh! smartness. but now i forgot what i was going to write. lol))


message 15: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((Oh, right, i was going to write something too...shoot))


message 16: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (last edited Jan 03, 2011 04:37PM) (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Bianca took that moment to step out of behind her tree.

"What are you doing?" She asked with an distracted tone.
She was looking at the ground, following the leaves as they got crushed.

((I can't remeber what i was going to say before. -_-))


message 17: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((lol. me neither. i just know i was going to argue out loud with myself. but i cnt remeber what i was going to say))

Raven spun around, startled by the voice she heard. She saw Bianca, staring at the area where one of her feet now lay. In spite of herself Raven grinned slightly, Bianca couldnt tell exactly where she was at because she was invisible.

"Being indecisive," Raven responded truthfully.


message 18: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
"That part's obvious." Bianca replied, suddenly feeling Jasmine's thoughts becoming more mischievous.

She felt a sort of ripple pass through her, and she risked a glance at her hand. It was shining like new steel.

"Just a precaution." She said under her breath. She's been in this sort of situation before, and it never really ended well.

Her stare went back to the leaves, and her breathing slowed as Raven's steps did.


message 19: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
"Heh."

Raven dared breezing past Bianca again and didn't get caught; lucky for her. She stood again in front of the grave that she had been standing before. The air shimmered around her and she became visible.

"What do you think that is?" she asked curiously, cocking her head to the side and pointed towards the woods where she could've swore she had heard someone breathing.


message 20: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Bianca's eyes darted back and forth from Raven, and to where was pointing.
There's nothing there, she told herselfWhat game is she playing at?

Her breathing caught up with her heart as she took short and fasts breaths.
"I see nothing there." She answered, glad that her voice sounded calm.
This is very unlike the Raven I'd talked to before.


message 21: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
"But I do!" Raven insisted hysterically, backing away from the smoky image that came closer to her.

"DONT YOU SEE IT?!"


((i g2g. Nooooooooooo! my mother likes to torture me she does. lol))


message 22: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (last edited Jan 03, 2011 05:00PM) (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((-_- aww man. But it was getting so fun ^-^ bye))

She looked closer in the shadows, squinting.
An outline of...something, was there, but she couldn't pinpoint what it was.

"Raven?" She asked hesitantly, reaching for her arm. "Don't do anything...stupid." It as said more like a question.


message 23: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((change of mind! i remain. *fist pump* lol))

"Me, do something stupid?" Raven asked, her voice an octave higher than usual. "Thats ridiculous."


message 24: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (last edited Jan 03, 2011 05:05PM) (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((What? REALLY? YES! I was afraid that everything was going to get boring again...))

"Yes, you." Bianca swept next to Raven and grabbed her arm, positive to stop her from hurting someone.
Including Bianca herself.


message 25: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((do not fear, I am here! lol))

Raven didn't even recognize what Bianca had said. She was staring at the smoke fgure that was coming closer by the second. She walked backwards, stumbling over her feet as she did so.

"Get away," she said the the figure. " GO!"


message 26: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((Oh, wow. Cheesy. lol.))

((Wait, am i suppose to see the figure too? Or are you just crazy and hallucinating? c(: ))

Bianca swore as Raven started struggling and yelling.
"Will you shut up??" She added angrily.


message 27: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((hmm...idk. u culd see it too and we could both be going crazy. i could see it and be crazy. or i ca see it and have the sixth sense. whichever u prefer ^_^))

"But it's coming closer!" she groaned, starind wide-eyed in fear as the thing came closer.


message 28: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((Hmm...well, making people go crazy is fun, so i guess i could see i too.))

"What are you even..." She turned her head at the trees and gasped.
A horrible looking thing was walking, no crawling toward them, and she momentarily forgot how to walk.
Standing frozen, Bianca was still hanging tight to Raven.


message 29: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
"B-B-Blachthorn," Raven stuttered. "Do you have any idea what that thing is?"

As much as she wanted to move her legs wouldn't obey, and so she stood frozen there staring at the creature.


message 30: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((I want to say that it's Justin Bieber, but it wouldn't have been appropriate at the time -_- ...lol.))

Like a shock wave, Bianca was hit by a sudden screeching noise, like she was locked in a room with a hundred shouting people, double wit their minds.

She screamed along, hands pressed hard against her ears.
"STOP IT! MAKE IT STOP!"


message 31: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((Justin Bieber?! lol))


"Make what stop?!" Raven asked hysterically. "Argh!!"

In desperation she slapped her hand against the inside of her wrist and sent a column of flames spiraling towards the creature. It engulfed it, but once the flames had died down the creature was still there, looking unharmed.

"What do I do?!"


message 32: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
"R-RUN!" Bianca choked out, coughing up some blood. She had blood running down her hands, and onto her wrists.

"Oh god..." She mumbled. Her senses were numbing.


message 33: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
Instead of running Raven stood there, staring at Bianca.

"What happeneing to you?!" she wailed. "I haven't really practiced healing yet!!"


message 34: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (last edited Jan 03, 2011 05:43PM) (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Clumsily, Bianca got to her feet, knees shaking madly.
In her head, she realized that talking wouldmean more blood on the ground, so instead she thought hard, hoping that her powers could work the other way around too.

I don't know what's happening...but we have to get out of here, please. She urged to Raven, hoping dearly she understood.

If she concentrated hard, she was sure that tears were forming in her eyes.


message 35: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
Raven just stood there, staring at Bianca.

"Now you can't talk!" she moaned. "Oh, this is perfect."

Raven turned her head, and noticed that the creature was even closer.

"Okay," Raven said, trying to remain calm. "We should probably run, but it doesn't look like you're in a good shape for running. I can try to transfer some of my invisibility to you," she said. "As long as I'm touching you and concentrating hard enough it should work. But I don't know if it will fool that...thing."

Raven laid her hand on Bianca's arm, trying not to shiver as she got a flashback of a memory.

"No," she cried to herself. "Not now!"
She tried to keep the thoughts out of her head and turned to Bianca whose arm she was still touching. "Concentrate..."

It won't work, she heard a voice say in her head.


message 36: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (last edited Jan 04, 2011 04:13PM) (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Bianca fell on her knees again, trying to crawl her away.
But Raven's hand was clutching her arm too hard.

"Ow." She choked out, her breathing coming in an irregular rhythm.

Please, lets just get out of here; please...

((Sorry it's so short, but i'm not too sure what to write...))


message 37: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (last edited Jan 04, 2011 04:16PM) (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((its okay :)im not sure what to write now either! lol))

Raven released her grip on Bianca, but stood frozen.

"Dont, go," she choked out, understanding why Bianca was leaving, but not wanting to be left alone.
"Can't..make...legs...move..."


message 38: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Bianca swore to herself and grasped Raven's arm herself, shutting her eyes tightly.

She was trying to make me invisible...maybe i could do the same back to her.

She felt the familiar ripple pass through her own body, but it stopped at her finger tips, not allowing itself to continue to Raven's body.

This time Bianca swore out loud.

Why won't you just....UUGH. She shook her head and tried again, this time putting her whole mind to it.


message 39: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
"What are you doing?" Raven asked, staring down at the place where Bianca was gripping her arm.

"That's kind of tight," she gasped.

Thats the point, a voice rang out. Now you won't be able to use your arm!

The voice cackled inside her head, and she tried her best not to scream.


message 40: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Looks like making us both bulletproof won't work... Bianca finally decided.

She looked up at Raven and gasped. She had really held her arm tight.
On Raven's wrist were red marks, made by Bianca's metal grip.

Bianca shut her eyes tighter just in time for a second wave of screeching to come her way.

She screamed.


message 41: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
A low moan of pain escaped Ravens lips as Bianca's grasp was loosened.

"Blackthorn," she said weakly, falling to her knees on the ground.


message 42: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
((I just realized something...why do we always end up making dramatic scenes? It is fun, though...))

Blood wasn't a matter anymore; even if it was dribbling from the corner of her mouth.

Bianca grabbed a rock and threw it hard at the thing. It passed right through.
She looked at Raven who was now looking impossibly pale, and then her own thoughts slowed as she stared at the thing, no expression of fear on her face.

What is it saying, She thoughts hard, Concentrate...


message 43: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
((i know right?! lol. i guess this makes up 4 my lack of drama in real life :P lol))

"Tell it to stop," she moaned, tears streaming down her face. "Make it go away..."

You know I'm not coming from that beast thats about to eat you! the voice said indignantly.

Shut up!, Raven thought.


message 44: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
"Damn it, Raven. If a voice is trying to help you, answer it!" Bianca sobbed, hearing Raven's conversation with the voice.

A tree was at her back. She managed a small grin.

Using the tree as leverage, Bianca crawled her way to a stand.

"How are we going to kill you?" She murmured weakly, savoring every word like it was a sweet desert.


message 45: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
"Did you hear what it was saying before?!" Raven cried out hysterically.
"It practically said you were trying to destroy my arm! I don't think that's help!"

Maybe if you asked nicely, the voice suggested.

No, she responded stubbornly.

It's your funeral...and your friends...

Your evil, what do I do?

Go for the middle of its back. Doesnt that part seem a darker gray; solid, maybe?



message 46: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Bianca stared at Raven for one last second and said quickly, "That voice better be right." and then she pushed away from the tree, lunging toward the thing.

Passing right through it, Bianca coughed hard, but did a shoulder roll and stood up. She reached down and took out a blade from her right boot.

Why do i keep forgetting about this? She asked herself angrily.

She raised it threateningly, stabbing it into the darker part of its back.

Bianca's senses vanished, and fell to the floor along with the beast.


message 47: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
"Bianca!" Raven yelled, while the voice remained silent. "I told you we shouldn't listen!" she said as she ran towards her.

Very nice!

I am.

Nuh-uh. Look at what happened!

But Bianca

Now it was one death instead of two, I saved your life. Your welcome.

Raven placed her fingers on the inside of Bianca's left wrist.
"She still has a pulse," she murmured to herself. "Bianca, wake up!"


message 48: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
She heard voices, but Bianca didn't dare move.

Everything hurt, and if she moved, she had the feeling that she would explode like a land mine.

She lifted her left hand as a test, bringing it up to cover her ear.

"Your talking too loud." She muttered angrily.


message 49: by Jasmine | ModernScrolls, Raven, the phsyco one (new)

Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 454 comments Mod
"Oh mi gosh your alive!" Raven exclaimed, relieved. She moved over to give Bianca some room.

See, said the voice. I'm always right.

Raven didn't respond. Instead she ignored the voice and stared intently at Bianca.


message 50: by Juliet, Blackthorn, the one that not many people understand. (new)

Juliet | 491 comments Mod
Bianca leaned on her elbows, yawning like she was in deep sleep for days.

"Where's my ipod." She whispered, reaching into her jacket.

Smiling now that she had music, Bianca got up groggily.
She quickly grabbed onto the tree in seconds, looking like it was her only chance at life she closed her eyes.


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