Calling all Demigods! discussion

Name:
Looks:
Personality:
Age:
Other:

Name: Alanna
Looks: She has medium length blonde hair, with bangs.She has very, very light gray eyes. Her hair is hardly ever messy, because she likes to even keep her hair in harmony. Her skin is pretty fair, because she doesn't do sports or go out much, even though she lives in Texas.

Personality: She is very sweet and has a calm disposition. She always wants to be a peace maker. She never wants to get involved in fights. She doesn't like to use weapons, either. She is a rambler. She will ramble a LOT. This is because a) she is young, and b) she is often missing her home.
Age: 9
Other: This is her third year at camp. She is fairly familiar with the campers, but is still learning new things about the camp. She doesn't ever go to the battle arena, which makes her seem weak to some of the other campers, but the truth is, she doesn't like fighting. However, the idea of fighting is growing on her. She can put together harmony in music she writes and picking colors that go well together. She stays year round.

Name: Jaidon Etiquite
Looks: Freckles dot the slightly-tanned face of his. With a sharp jawline and bridge of his nose. Curly firery orage hair tops his head, cut so it grows slightly up, not out. Warm, milk chocalote hershey eyes, and blush-pink lips. Tall for his age, but also strong.
Personality: Caring and warm hearted, trustworthy and loyal. But also quick-witted and protective. Sometimes he can be a jerk, and stands up for what is right, in his opinion. Though he can be that jokey-cool kid that always gets away with stuff also. His personality is a charming combinations of bad boy, sweetheart, and socialist.
Age: 13
Other: An intricate warm colored tightly woven braclet that hold three metal, bronze, and silver star charms. When twisted in the the right harmony if becomes a complex sword with the combinations of metal swirling through it, a distraction to the eyes especially in sunlight. HE carries a silver flute it was enchanted when he was younger, when played the right notes he can make people do stuff. From sleeping to screeching in pain.

Goes home during the school year.

Name: Sylvain

Age: 15

Appearence: She has light brown hair which comes down in waves below her shoulders. Her hair is normally in a neat bun or on her back. She also has grey-blue eyes, which often hold a sypathetic look or a one which gives away her thoughts away. Sylvain has a graceful frame with thin legs.

Personality: She is very caring. Sylvain always wants to help others. She is good-natured and slightly naive. It is very hard to keep her face from giving away her thoughts or emotions, so it makes things somewhat hard to tell her secrets. Sylvain hates secrets because most of them are probably rumors or other not so nice things.

Other: When she was young her father gave her a violin to help her concentrate on bringing her emotions into music. She loves pegasus riding and going to the beach.

Name: Ryland Oak
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Looks:
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Ryland has shaggy black hair that swoops over and half-way across his right eye. He has a slight tan from spending so much time on the beach. His eyes a velvety chocolate brown with hints of green amongst them. He often wears a chain around his neck with a caduceus on it, which simbolizes Harmonia.
Personality:
Ryland is very open-minded.
He thinks eveything is worth studying. He hopes to oneday find something that will complete his mature collection. He is looking for a rare flower called the Black Bat Flower and the even rarer Green Jade Flower. He wishes no harm on anyone and has a way with words that can normally stop fighting all together, but not always and it only works on small arguements or carried-away fist fights. He is only ever offended if you try to start a fight with him, which he will gladly oppodse to.
History:
Ryland is from Hawaii.
This is why he loves to surf. He used to go out on the beach everyday and stare at the ovean as if to command it to bring more waves forth, which, of course, never worked, but he liked to imagine it did.
Oneday, a huge tidal wave came forth and wiped out all the surfers, except Ryland. This was for sure a hint to leave Honolulu and even Hawaii all together, escpecially when the Crakan showed.
His family high-tailed it out of Hawaii and moved to Florida. They sent Ryland to Camp Half-Blood at age nine. He's been here for almost two years.
Other: He LOVES Harry Potter.

Name: Emerald(Em, to close friends)
Looks: She has wavy auburn hair that just reaches her shoulders and forest green eyes. Her skin is a warm gold color with some light freckles over her small nose. She is about 5'6" and willowy, with a little gap between her front teeth.
Personality: Emerald has a soft, quiet voice, but she uses it quite a bit. Though she's intelligent, she often forgets to think things through. She's very good at making compromises and loves helping people.
Age: 15
Other: She's new to the camp. She does(or, did before the camp) a lot of volunteer work- her little brother was autistic and died from pneumonia when he was 7. She also has a very slight lisp- it's not usually noticable, but when she's scared or angry it tends to come out.

Name: Nevaeh Blaise Cokor
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Looks: Nevaeh has black, almost blue, hair down to her hips, and icy blue eyes. She is small and slender, and has very pale skin, which bruises easily.
Personality: Nevaeh is a very bubbly, happy person, She loves making people happy. She is almost fearless, though she has an intense fear of older guys, because she was terrified of her father.
Other: Her father hated that she was different, so he kicked her around and encouraged her younger sister, Lia, to hit her and get her in trouble all the time. This may not seem so traumatic, but Nevaeh's father threatened her and so she was afraid that he would kill her. She ran away when a satyr found her, without looking back. She has a curious ability to influence another person's thought's, making them almost the same as her own (because Hormonia is the goddess of harmony, oneness of mind *hint, hint*, and concord).

Spam Dies

What was the spam in question?

No, there was just a lot of spam in this topic anyway. We're supposed to tell people to change their characters, leave the post up until they do and then delete all the posts so that the topics don't get cluttered. I wasn't saying you were spamming, that was actually quite helpful.

Oh, don't worry. I was just asking.

I'm a new demigod! Here is my character file.

Name: Harmona Glee(Har-mone-uh)

Age: 15

Appearance: This girl has deep brown eyes, and brown hair so dark it could be black that goes to the middle of her back. She wears orange Camp-Half blood tank tops and white shorts most of the time. She has a small scar above her brow that she hides with her bangs. She got it from a monster attack when she was seven.

Personality: She always has a positive meaning for something. If you catch her alone you either hear her singing a song she wrote or sparing. In battle she is dangerous enemy because, she trained with weapons ever sense twelve and shows no mercy.She loves singing, swimming, and spends a lot of time at the lake. She can be far away sometimes, and when she is you can't get to her. She has been at camp for seven years. No matter what weapon she has, she can kill as many with it. Ever sense her monster attack at seven, she hasn't been as happy or goody goody. She's more distant and it's a miracle if you can get her to laugh.
When a stranger comes up to her she tenses, because when she was ten a stranger came up and tried to kidnap her. It's hard to earn her trust, but once you get a friendship going, she'll open up. Harmona will do anything to help her friends. It's her fetal flaw. Although if something sounds unrealistic to her, she'll bring a weapon.

Weapon: Her weapon is a three foot sword with a emerald in the hilt.

History: Grew up with a hard life. Her family was broke and it only got worse as the monster attacks came. When the first attack came Harmona's parents used her as a shield. She had no friends, except for her imaginary ones. She was locked away in her room when she was eight. She decided then that she would run away. On the run a satyr found her and took her to Camp Half-Blood. When she ran away she never gave a second thought of her parents, or how they didn't want her. She ran without looking back.




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CABIN: Harmonia

So what's she like now? Expand on her personality.

Ok, thanks for tip.

Changed it, better now???

You added one sentence. No.

Two and ok.

Can't think of anything else. What i put is basically her. I did add some stuff though. Reread it and tell me what you think.

Not a mod, but I still say it's not enough. Can't you find any pictures that look like her?

Ummmm, I'll try. Give me five mins, and keep checking to see if I respond.

Now you're borderline Mary-Sue. She's not an Ares camper. She might have a knack for battle, but no one could do that to a monster. Harmonia is not the goddess of prophet, so adding that she can mention the future is unrealistic. Expand on why she's a dangerous person in battle, how does she react to strangers and friend. Etc.

I tried. Nothing. I'll draw one and get it up as soon as possible. That ok???

Follow Iv's instructions and then we'll talk.

Iviana (The Sign Painter) wrote: "Now you're borderline Mary-Sue. She's not an Ares camper. She might have a knack for battle, but no one could do that to a monster. Harmonia is not the goddess of prophet, so adding that she can me..."

Ok, and she can do that to a monster because, Harmonia's father is Ares. Harmona get's that.

But in a nanosecond? Too Mary Sue. Not even children of Ares can do that.

There are several story's, andveral versions. Harmony is the goddess of harmony and concord (which are technically synonyms). She does not have any Ares traits.

Now?

Iviana (The Sign Painter) wrote: "There are several story's, andveral versions. Harmony is the goddess of harmony and concord (which are technically synonyms). She does not have any Ares traits."

Jo wrote: "But in a nanosecond? Too Mary Sue. Not even children of Ares can do that."

Ok, I'll change that.

Jo wrote: "Follow Iv's instructions and then we'll talk."

kk

Hello????

They aren't on right now. Wait.

kk, thnks.

Since*. All the stuff in "other" can go under personality. Again, she's not an Ares camper. -_-

Also, the "always wins in arguments" thing? I don't think a battle oriented camper, of a peaceful goddess, would out debate Athena kids. But I'm not a mod.

Kk.

Thanks.

Yup. Is it better now??

I'm not a mod, but I have a few little changes. She needs a last name, first off. And you should have a "History" section.

Ok, Thnk. Will take care of now.

"Her power is one of battle." no it's not. -_- if you want an Ares camper, make a freaking Ares camper. Don't put it under Harmonia.

Quick thing: History should have the following bits of info: If she is year round, when she arrived at CHB, who her parents were, all that stuff.

Rudyards wrote: "Quick thing: History should have the following bits of info: If she is year round, when she arrived at CHB, who her parents were, all that stuff."

KK, thank you.

Now, I think I got it. Give me a heads up when read.

Iviana (The Sign Painter) wrote: ""Her power is one of battle." no it's not. -_- if you want an Ares camper, make a freaking Ares camper. Don't put it under Harmonia."

I changed it.