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Here's one example of my Writing:Title: Forever
Genre: Poetry/Romance
Description: When you are scared to say forever. . . i think it's at best not to see with your eyes, but with you heart ♥
Forever - Poem
She covers her eyes
and avoids to see.
She whispers his name
in dreams, in her sleep.
She takes his hand
and presses it to her cheek.
She tells him the words
she’s too afraid to speak.
He listens to her patiently
and loves her with every touch.
‘Forever’ he says
‘Forever’ she says.
She covers her eyes
and begins to see.
By: JH
And here's another one:Title: Red Ribbons
Genre: I have no Idea. Poetry/Drama, maybe?
Description: Its pretty itself explanatory.
Red Ribbons
She sees her
Soft white skin,
The soft blue veins
That mark a way
Beneath her skin
In her pale white wrist,
She feels her pulse
Its pressure underneath,
Almost like its someone
Who wants to scream,
She traces lines to
Relieve the pain,
She holds in her hands
Her deadly reflection,
And traces her lines
Again and again,
She extends her arm
For everyone to see,
To show the world
Those dark red ribbons
That adorn her sleeve,
Those simple lines that
Caused the pain,
Those beautiful ribbons
That released the pain.
And only to realize
That the ribbons in her sleeve. . .
They belong to me.
Only to realize
That the girl with red ribbons.
That girl is me.
By: JH
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Another one of mineTitle: Fall
Genre: Poetry/Romance
Description: Falling in love is hard...
Fall
The tree shades
down its leaves for spring;
She gazes outside
to watch the leaves
fall down to the grass
and make it soft
for the fall that comes
for the two of us.
As I gaze in your eyes
and you swim into mine
I can’t help but wonder,
What will it happen
when the last leave falls?
Will our bridge in the ground
be strong enough for the both of us?
She gazes outside
to watch the tree,
The tree shades its leaves
just in time for spring.
By: JH
All of this are just examples of what I do, so, again, please check my Goodreads page for more =)http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...
Jude wrote: "Another one of mineTitle: Fall
Genre: Poetry/Romance
Description: Falling in love is hard...
Fall
The tree shades
down its leaves for spring;
She gazes outside
to watch the leaves
fall down to ..."
nice verse.
Jude wrote: "And here's another one:
Title: Red Ribbons
Genre: I have no Idea. Poetry/Drama, maybe?
Description: Its pretty itself explanatory.
Red Ribbons
She sees her
Soft white skin,
The soft blue veins
T..."
Heartfelt! I love the title.
Jude wrote: "Here's one example of my Writing:
Title: Forever
Genre: Poetry/Romance
Description: When you are scared to say forever. . . i think it's at best not to see with your eyes, but with you heart ♥
Fo..."
This is cute =D
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed them =)
Title: White Red RoseGenre: Poetry/and something else
Description We all want to change, at some point in our lives, we need it. But changing, always comes with a price.
White Red Rose
There’s a white rose beneath my window.
Its petals pose in this winter cold,
Of dying wishes and desperate hopes.
My hand gently moves toward the cold white rose,
Until I realize its filled with a million thorns.
A sting in my hand, a deep red pain,
Running blood that falls upon the white red rose.
There’s a red rose beneath my window,
Its petals shine in the golden light,
Of living dreams and freshly hopes.
My hand gently moves toward the now red rose.
The beautiful rose gazes outside in this winter cold,
Though she feels safe and warm
Inside my hands, that have now become the newly home
Of the pure red rose
By: JH
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Though she feels safe and worm-You mean, warm?
oh wow *exhales heavily* this is really deep. I really like the way you... make your poetry. I donno what to say; but great job!
Amina wrote: "Though she feels safe and worm-You mean, warm?
oh wow *exhales heavily* this is really deep. I really like the way you... make your poetry. I donno what to say; but great job!"
OH MY GOD!!! I can't believe I actually wrote WORM.... I actually would like to be more surprised but I recently discovered this happens very often to me xD
I'm really glad you liked it and THANK YOU so much for telling me ^^!!!
though... Just think of it, worm are usually safe... six feet under ground kind off safe.... inside your apple kind off safe..... so maybe its not so bad... right? ^^
hehe, yeah maybe not. And no worries, friend, these typos haunt all of us :DKeep the poetry coming =D
Though I enjoy writing light and fun poems as well as novels. I would like to offer this somewhat deeper composition, and would love feedback on it. With Open Arms
Wounds of the heart, that tear us apart
And rip at our very soul;
Compelled deep within, can start once again
To impart their heavy toll.
The loss it instills can trample our will,
Entwining the threads of life.
Working on our minds, while life’s flow it binds,
To impale us with new formed strife.
We feel not the love that comes from above,
As well as from friend and kin.
It patiently waits, the flood gates abate;
While we fall into shame and sin.
To welcome inside Christ’s returning bride,
Letting not condemnation in.
Lifting us when we fell; giving strength , he compels
Us to live; placing trust in him.
Through loss that is great, a deep sadness creates
and pull us away from him.
As we stand on his word, he will strengthen and gird,
offering his refuge again.
The sadness will pass, more slowly than fast,
As he gently guides us back home.
For the soul that’s downcast, his love forever will last
Wherever his children may roam.
As we traverse the earth, establishing worth
And building our worldly gain,
The lessons learned may sear and burn;
while on our soul, life casts its stain.
We pause to reflect, of the life we each set,
to reach for a higher plane.
Loved ones we’ve known, memories cast in stone,
In our hearts forever remain.
SA Lawrence
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Tittle: Forever .
Genre: drama/fiction/romance/stuff in between
Summary: When seventeen year old Evangeline Woods is filled with forever promises, like the promise of her father to stay with her, the promise of a marriage to stay together, of friends growing up and staying side by side, and a boyfriend’s promise to love her, she’s in a moment where everything is perfect, until, in the blink of an eye and a terrible car crash takes all of those promises, all of those forever’s, away, they have all been broken, so now she must go to the place where it all started, Her grandmother‘s house and old town, forget the life she once had, and start a new one, to see if those forever’s can be saved, and to trust herself again. Find family when she thought she’d lost it. Find love when she wasn’t looking. Find friendship when she was in most need, and to find a home, when she had never felt so lost.
Sometimes you need to lose it all, to find everything.
Here's the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I write Poems too, here's all my writing:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...
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