I MADE ART discussion

Same rules as the privious

A poem on: Black

From 23rd of Jan to 23rd of Feb

*Smiles super big* Thanks, I had a lot of fun writing the poem!

The dark night covers me,
Killing my breath.
My eyes burn,
My soul cries,
As the black fills me up.
It whispers at me,
Telling me what to do,
How to be.
I can’t fight it,
This part of me.
I scream and yell,
But not one hears.
The bone crunch,
Life haunting,
Thing in me.
The blackness,
Everywhere,
Forever waiting.
It eats me and chokes me,
Till I am no more.

-- Elisabeth M. Sadai

I love this one!

really...meish. sorry, I cant make much comments till the contest is over...

No one else is posting... :(

Ooops, since there r no enteries lissy, u r the winner!

YAY! Cool :D

I could start writing just pick another topic and I'll get on it.I'm Grace by the way.I'm Lissy friend.I Think she was the one to ask me to join this group any way whats the next topic?Trust me I'll give Lissy a run for her money this time.I don't go easy on people especialy not friends.

yoo guys ar good at poems, i wish i coold do that okay please

((okay fine I'll just post one so you guys can see what i do.))

"This Darkness" by: On'nanoko

I live with darkness all around,
the darkness that carries no sound,
this darkness covers me,
is a darkness that you can not see,
this darkness has no light,
this is the darkness that most fight,
it tells you things you shouldn't know,
like how to kill your every foe,
when this darkness takes control it takes your body,mind then soul,
this darkness we try to hide,
some in it do abide,
I'll tell you this before you go insain,
THIS DARKNESS CAN NOT BE SLAIN.

((so what do you guys think?))

Woah... I didn't know you wrote.

well we all have some sort of tallent just some of us don't always show it and i told you I'd write one on darkness didn't I?

I know, but I didn't know you could write.

well we learn something new everyday don't we?