Every Little Thing discussion

This is where you paste if you want someone to review your writing. Please do not paste your whole story to here. Please fill out the format below. thank you

Name(or nickname):
Story Name:
How many Chapters:
Link to the story:
Pick apart or overall Review:

Name: Megamarie
Story Name: Dear Diary
How many Chapters: 3
Link to the story: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Pick apart or overall Review:
New place. New life. Marynhein Carter is an 11 year-old girl who just moved in with her family in a neighborhood called Crownsville.

New school, new friends, no enemies and new heartbreaks.

"I don't want to be forgotten. That's the reason why I have to do this to be remembered," Marynhein said.

Sorry guys but until we get more editors we are going to have to put this on hold for a little while. If you know someone who likes to edit, ask them if they want to join the group.