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message 1: by Jennifer (last edited Oct 10, 2011 08:17PM) (new)

Jennifer | 40 comments Mod
Here, you can practice making characters. Use the format below, and you can just post the characters here. Give other people suggestions to help them improve.



-FOR PEOPLE-

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Appearance: NO PICTURES OR LINKS. ONLY HANDWRITTEN DESCRIPTIONS. (This is a 'writing' group, not 'I'm too lazy to write up an description of my character so I'll find one on Google Images' group)

Personality: The longer, the better :P

History: What has happened in their past, so far. Optional, but it would be great if you did it

Family: State any living/dead relatives

Skills/talents/hobbies/intrests: Any particular hobby or talent this person may have?


-FOR ANIMALS-

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Species/Breed:

Appearance: NO PICTURES OR LINKS. ONLY HANDWRITTEN DESCRIPTIONS. (This is a 'writing' group, not 'I'm too lazy to write up an description of my character so I'll find one on Google Images' group)

Personality: The longer, the better :P

History: What has happened in their past, so far. Optional, but it would be great if you did it

Kin: State any living/dead relatives

Skills/talents/hobbies/interests: Any particular hobby or talent this person may have?


message 2: by Dameon (new)

Dameon (emberrassed) Name: Ariah

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Appearance:
A tall, slim seventeen year old with hazel eyes. She has a few freckles, but they are barely visable. Ariah has dark brown hair down a little past her shoulders and has rather straight teeth and usually wears purple eyeshadow and eyeliner, but not too much.

Personality:
Ariah is a nice girl that's kind, but cautious. Usually, she will stick up for a friend, or anyone that is being accused or yelled at for no reason. She's open to those nearest to her and she opens up to them, and they open up to her in return. She's not fast to trust someone thouroughly, she would want them to trust her first.

Having lost her mother at a young age, she is very soft towards people younger than her and people that have lost someone close to them. Whenever someone describes her, they usually can't, unless they are best friends with her. Sometimes she will just bottle up her feelings and deal with them later. She has a lot of self control and can be nice and kind when the other person is very rude and disrespectful.

History:
Ariah was born in a little town that not many people cared to know about. She wasn't exactly special, rich or poor, just in the middle. She was the first of two children that her mother and father produced, herself and her little twelve year old brother. When she was ten, her brother five, her mother died, mudered. Her father sought out the murderer and killed him, but was never found out.

When she was thirteen, she met Jasmine. They were best friends through the end. They had each other's backs and stuck together until the end. They went through middle school together and made it through together, and entered High School. This was the place they met Davis. He was a new student, a high school freshmen, and they became close friends in very short time. Soon, at age 17, exactly on Ariah's birthday, they started dating.

When they were still seventeen, the three decided to drop out of school. Ariah was yelled at by her father, and Jasmine too, but Davis's parents understood partially. They left together and stayed together. Then, still 17, Jasmine's parents were murdered. She went home and found her parents gone, her sister and brother in the basement. She took her other relatives and brang them with them and they moved to Grand Junction.

Now it is the present :D

Family: Kamron (Deceased, Mother), Matthew (Father), James (Little brother), Davis (Boyfriend, considered family to her), Jasmine (Best friend, considered family)

Skills/talents/hobbies/intrests: Can sing pretty well, likes basketball, and likes the FBI who inspect murders since her mother was murdered and her best frined's parents were also murdered.


message 3: by Dreamergirl (last edited Oct 08, 2011 06:38PM) (new)

Dreamergirl | 3 comments Name: Alice McDonald

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Appearance:
Medium hight, healthy-looking, brown-chocolate eyes, always has a smile on her face.

Personality:
She is true leader but with a soft heart. Her whole personality shines whenever she's in the room. Alice is very magnetic and self-controlled, but she can sometimes be a bit too tough with herself, though she is always in control and very self-confident.

History:
Alice has a complicated past even though it might not seem clear what it is. Even if you don't know her very well you could see her wisdom as if she has been through a lot and overcome a lot but haven't given up hope. You can see her attitude towards you, and towards life easily since she is very open and doesn't try to hide her feelings, knowing, through experience and from watching her friends and relatives that it's the worst thing you could do and that in doing so you could ruin yourself. The only time she feels bad is when someone rejacts her or when she isn't doing her very best.She gives a lot and expects a lot in return. If you could trust her to do the right thing and if you didn't judge her from the first glance, she could be the best friend (and the best girlfriend)you'd ever had, but unfortunately she hasn't had much luck with friendship in her past. In her life she was constantly put in the middle, which is why she had become really good at balancing and great at time-management and self-control.

Family: Johnatan Lukas McDonald (Father), Sandy Mcdonald (Mother)

Skills/talents/hobbies: She is very creative and plays the flute which she is very good at. She loves to draw and sings very well. She also loves writing and she sees it as a way of expressing her strong feelings.


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