Authors Anonymous discussion

This is just where I'll post my writing. Stories, poems, etc.

Everyone, I've worked really hard on these sories, poems, etc. so please please please, do not steal them or use them in anyway. If you want to post it somwhere else or show it to someone because you liked it then fine, but please don't take credit for them.
Thanks!

Love

Love you cruel, cruel thing
Come look at what you've done
I loose, and once again you've won
That stupid game called love
I stumbled once again into your little trap
And you've took my heart, and torn it up
Can't you just leave it at that?
But no, you'll wait until I've fixed my broken heart
You'll wait until it mends
Then you'll come and start that cruel, cruel game
And break my heart again
Why do you hurt me so, oh love?
Why can't we just be friends?
But no, you live to play this game
The game that never ends

Gone

This morning as you walked out the door
You told me not to worry anymore
You said you'd be back, and I believed you.
But as the hours passed on
And night turned to dawn
I realized you weren't coming back.

You'd forgotten me, forsaken me
You'd left me there to die
But somehow you couldn't understand
The reason why I cried.
As you were gone I longed for you
I thought of your face and the way you smiled
And I just sat there for a while.
Thinking of the things you used to do
And thinking of the person that I knew.
The person that I used to know.
The one who decided to go.

I decided to leave
And stepped into the street
But then I heard a scream
And I realized it was me
The car was coming towards me fast
And I knew I wasn't gonna last
I tried to run
But my legs wouldn't move.
The car hit me and it all went black
My thoughts turned to you
As my head fell back
And I realized you weren't coming back.

wow. Gone is so...dramtic. I love it!

Thanx :)

I agree. I love how it was a mix of rhyming and nonrhyming. You knew just where to put everything :D

I think I might've got lucky there :)
It just.....idk, came to me.

that's the way my poems are; if there's no inspiration or not the right setting or mood, there's no poetry, i can't just sit down and write. that's why my poems for school usually turn out bad.

Yeah.

Soundproof

Match dropped in the room
Flames dance around the walls
I reckon its about noon
Yet no one hears my calls

I call, yet no one hears me
The flames are now rising higher
I don't reckon they can hear me
But I'm being consumed by the fire

I yell for help from someone
As the flames crawl up my legs
But I get a response from no one
And I unwillingly start to beg

I scream out loud in agony
The flames closing in on my bed
I know that no one can hear me
But I guess it's too late, now I'm dead.

intense!

Ebonypelt wrote: "intense!"

Agreed! But it's sooooo cool. Your a natural poet, Jasmine!

Thanx ^-^
I don't think I'm that good.

But you are! All of my poems are too childish. : ( I'm not a very good poet.

that's like me when i have to write for school, you can't just sit down and say 'i am going to write a poem now.'

I know!

yay! agreement! it's so annoying when the teacher is like 'ok class, we're writing poems today' it's like 'no we're not. we're writing lame excuses for poems.'

yeah.

Ebonypelt ~I Voted Saxon~ wrote: "yay! agreement! it's so annoying when the teacher is like 'ok class, we're writing poems today' it's like 'no we're not. we're writing lame excuses for poems.'"

LOL!!!

yeah, we started reading poetry today in lit. i'm gonna die if i can't read them myself! the class is awful and the recordings are just as bad!

lol!! my teacher made us all write poem books. im like "this is not true poetry."

hey we did that sixth grade! i took a long time trying to write the best poems turned in, for my efforts i got my book in the Fine Arts Fair at the end of the year!

Awesome!!
On Firday my teacher goes, "I took your poem book home and read the poems to my mom, she said they were awesome!"
I'm like, "Thanks..."
WeIrD

yeah, that's kinda freaky, she didn't have your permission to let other people read your poems!

ikr? okay...I'd let my fourth and fifth grade teacher read my poems to my mom, but still...

yeah, talk about presumptuous!

I'm like...o-okay
Thank you???

welcome??

lol

i'm just that hilarious i know!

Broken

I know I’m broken
And only time will mend the holes
The ache I feel will never go
But I just want you to know

That I will try
But I will never be the same
I’ve been broken too many times
I’ve been taped and glued together
But nothing holds

I know I’m broken
And only time will heal the cuts
The scars will never leave
They are now a part of me

I will try
But I will never be the same
I’ve been broken too many times
I’ve been taped and glued together
But nothing holds

I know that I’ll never be the same
But if you can stand by me
And love me no matter my faults
Then that’s really all I need
Just don’t give up on me

I will try
But I will never be the same
I’ve been broken too many times
I’ve been taped and glued together
But nothing holds


song/poem

Wow, that's amazing. There's really no other word to describe that

Thanks (:

No problem :D

Nice job...I liked Broken the best :)

there is something stronger than tape and glue to hold your heart. believe me, i've been there.