Writers Unite discussion

Here's my poetry and my writing.

Where? lol

sorry, i haven't posted it yet. I didn't have time. I'll post it up later.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I haven't come up with a title yet. hope you enjoy it. : )

constructive criticism is welcomed.

I'll get to this ASAP. But you have to remember I have loads of people's writings to get to, so sorry if I take a while :/

that's fine.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...

Ok, I finally read it: very sad but greatly written. I feel for her, her sadness is now mine too. Very good descriptons :)

“I understand that you’re suffering from a great lost. I’m sorry.”

-I think it should be loss not lost

Ummm...the main character is a guy. :/

wait...are you talking about the story or the poems? i'm confused.

yes... so?

i posted another short story in the same link.