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Feb 25, 2011 05:31PM
i have a name for my book but im not sure it the RIGHT name... look at the help!- book covers topic to see what my book id about...
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Okay so I wan't to call it either Hidden or Hidden Secrets? Which is better?
Which should I call my new fantasy book:Fallen
The Keeper
Guardian
The Broken Angle
God's Citadel
OR:
The Unopened Citadel?
Umm, well it is symbolic for a mountain climber climbing up Everest for the first time. And its a bout a fallen angle who searches for the one thing that is impossible to find or conquer, the Citadel made by god, and given to the Devil as a gift.(ironic, huh?))
((Not really the bible is all about loving your enemies))
((Well I dont read the bible a lot, a bit below average on the relegious
((Oh I have also never read the bible but I do go to church and that is how I know this wait why are we talking in the ()'s ))
I dunno, but do you wanna help me?
Can you chose one of those titles?
The Unopened Citadel sounds the best to me, personally.
Okay well I like Fallen and the broken Angel so why not A Fallen Angel's Broken Cry?
Oooohhhh....good one, but give me a moment to shorten it(by shorten i mean sound short)The Fallen's Beoken Cry.
THX!!
Happy-face, like a very protruding smile.
Wit if you have to go why are you sill here?
HELLO? anybody goin to help me...
how about 'Black Death'...
The Dark Demise?Ring Around the Rosies?
The Dark Creed?
Death by Creed?
Is this a good start to my book.I had to get there fast, my one chance to get into the Citadel and back to heaven is closing, but the one thing that gives me a reason to stay on Earth is in trouble, and I have to choose now! God da** it! He's here.
•Five Months Earlier•
But that is already a Video Game.
Yesh, and I always try to make the readers figure out whats it about, not just say it in the nmae.
my book needs a better title...
mine?but it doesnt really match the story all that well...
its not so much about secrets than a girl running from and evil apprentice and with a girl she meats along the way...
no... she uses spells and portals to get around... and it doesnt sound right for this piece
Creed means like, group, generally associated with war, or mercinaries, like Assasins Creed.
i want to use mystical in the title but i cant use secrets cause the only secret is that she hides her powers from her family...
no that makes it sound kinda weird...
...mystical voage? no but thats sounds like the right track...
My Mystical life? Mystic Forest? Mystical Me? The Mystical song? Mystical Falls? Mystic Mist? Mystical miss? Mystical Move? The Mystic Look? The Mystic Rain Fall?
its more of like journy or passage or something like that but they dont sound right... i hate my complicated mind
