Let's All Write STORIES!!! discussion

okay, so this idea has been formulating in my mind for a while. its kind of weird. but here it is:
a man murders a woman's husband, though his death is believed to have been of natural causes. however, the wife of the man thinks otherwise- she suspects the truth. the murderer knows that she must be killed, but whenever she is home alone, the house is under constant surveillance (for that very reason). So during the day, when she isn't home, he sneaks into the widow's house and steals a home video or two so that he can learn the deceased husband's voice. he then creates a tape of the husbands voice, saying basically, "I'm in heaven and its great! i miss you so much! come join me!". a few days later, he sneaks in again and plants the tape recorder in her bedroom, set to go off at midnight that night. so the widow, in the middle of the night, thinks she hears her husband's voice asking her to join him in the land of the dead. Missing him terribly, she agrees to come "join him", and kills herself.

does that make any sense at all???? what do you guys think....???? also, i have no clue how to end this...

or begin it, for that matter...

Oh, wow......... That's intence.......... ^v^ I love it!

hehe
thanks!!! : D

kay, lets see how this goes! my idea is that there are like 3 sections, and the first 2 are the same story, but one's from the pov of the widow, one's from the pov of the murderer. then the last section is an epilogue (basically what happens after she kills herself). ummmm, i don't know if that's possible, but i guess we'll see!!!! :D

Charlotte
Part One

The key clicked softly in the door as it turned, and i pried it out with my gloved fingers. The door squeaked slightly as I opened it, revealing the dark hallway before me.
"Robin?"
Silence.
I figured he'd fallen asleep again. I removed my hat and scarf, chuckling to myself and enjoying the image i was sure i would see as soon as i stepped into the den: my darling Robin, sprawled across the sofa, a glass on the table next to him, no coaster underneath, of course. probably a newspaper or magazine in his hand. i laughed again at the thought that he may even be drooling or snoring. i quickly stripped off my coat and hung it on the hook, kicking off my snowy boots at the same time.
"Robin!" I called again, wondering if I'd wake him up.
I stepped forward and down the hall until i at last came to the den. turning towards the open door, i slipped my hand inside and flipped the switch.

i can only imagine what the neighbors must have thought of the terrible shriek that escaped my lips.

((wahhh! i'm so scared! jk, it's really good, if a little creepy. but, that is the point. anyway, write more. i would, but i gotta write a paper for geology. it sucks. ))

((aw bummer. umm.... jeez, i have no clue wut to write...!!!))

(( me neither. help us, someone!))

Here's a horror story I'm working on. It's about vampires!!! :D Please give feedback! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Thanks!!!
-Dylan