Chirenjenzie discussion

For my hook I had:
Meredith’s learned the rules for survival: never be late, call home secretly, and above all, keep Kaden happy. Because when he’s happy he turns back into the guy she fell in love with.

But I got some feedback that call home secretly was a bit confusing and not strongest word choice--I have a few alternatives--is there one you like best, or is it still not there yet?

don't make him jealous
check in all the time
no matter what, don't touch another boy

One thing I notice is that it's in past tense, you need to keep it in present: Meridith learns the rules for survival..... But I'm not sure about the hook, I really liked the other you had before better, in the letter you sent over to me =)