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"What, by the dust from the four corners, was that about?" ... if you had seen my house you would see why that tickles my funny bone :-P and there are a few from Darkling Thrush too!

Anyway, if Josh is reading this... will there be sequel to Noel & Robbie? Pretty please?

This deft ability to get the reader to fall in love with his characters and in a few smooth strokes paint a lovely picture is so rare...it's really, really hard to do within the confines of a small story like this. I'm coining the adjective lanyonesque for it now. :).


Where the protagonists are singularly heroic and tragic in Snowball, and have to overcome external and social obstacles that dog them, Icecapade was eventually all about internal moral questions for me (they have it good, but do they deserve it?).
I saw Noel as a seriously flawed person at the start -- morally, he's committed crimes which, however, he sees as victim-less (no violence perpretrated, after all, and the rich can afford to lose their baubles). And he's also seeing it through the lens of his childhood and family, where cat burglary is akin to sissified playing, and he's noble in avoiding the seriously objectionable crime profession that is hinted at and hangs like a dark shadow over him.
That didn't make it ok for me. it made it worse, actually. I'm personally in favor of austerity and personal penance and doing what's right (whether legal or otherwise). I could see a story ending in which he agreed to do a minimal sentence. Or lived simply, modestly, in a studio, working a night shift without the riches from his ill gotten gains, as he put it.
What's the point of punishment? What would it serve him going to jail, say? He's not going to commit further crimes. He's not a threat to society. He's rehabilitated. When people show remorse for their crimes, and repent sincerely, isn't there a universal human value that wants to forgive them?
Retribution is an intrinsic part of justice. People want an eye for an eye (but that's usually the victims). Most religions have something to say about it, for or against. But I don't see Noel repentant, and I feel he's not really had to suffer -- so where's the justice here?
And while thinking and wondering if I could bear to have Noel go to jail, I really came to a surprising discovery about my own thinking here. The only reason I didn't want him to suffer was that he finally found love with Robert. As did Robert (a truly innocent figure here). And I HATED the thought of separating them. I could not endure the thought of them not being together -- the punishment of being separated when you have that kind of love is far too great for the crime. If let's say this wasn't a love story and he didn't have Robert in his life, I would have no problem with him having to face the mistakes of his past and pay for them. And this despite the fact that I loved, loved, loved him. And Robert? So, so vulnerable and humbled and hurt and yet he's got this astonishing love for someone he should, by every rights, by god, hate hate hate. Robert was this secret, amazing wonderful black box to me and I still haven't gotten around to thinking about him fully. So I couldn't have them apart now. No Raskolnikovs here, moving on. :).
Such is love.

My thought exactly. You said it beautifully!

Exactly :)."
even the Xmas Angel at the end all clever clever writing

ns, you do a great job of putting your thoughts into words. Actually, you seem to be putting my thoughts into words! I have a really hard time expressing how I felt about a book in words, which is quite vexing considering how much I read!

They were never going to be separated though - Noel was quite persistent in my opinion , he knew there was something there and kept at it! Loved how he kissed Roberts hand all better :-)
"What, by the dust from the four corners, was that about?" ... if you had seen my house you would see why that tickles my funny bone
Yes, it is painfully true of this corner of the universe too. :-D
Yes, it is painfully true of this corner of the universe too. :-D
Cleon wrote: "I need to get my hand on Strange Fortune next month!
Anyway, if Josh is reading this... will there be sequel to Noel & Robbie? Pretty please?"
It's a natural for a sequel -- a story about Noel being pressured to do one last heist -- so probably. Although I hasten to add I don't have immediate plans to write it. It's just that as I was writing I kept thinking...oh, what if...
Which usually leads to sequels.
Anyway, if Josh is reading this... will there be sequel to Noel & Robbie? Pretty please?"
It's a natural for a sequel -- a story about Noel being pressured to do one last heist -- so probably. Although I hasten to add I don't have immediate plans to write it. It's just that as I was writing I kept thinking...oh, what if...
Which usually leads to sequels.

Anyway, if Josh is reading this... will there be sequel to Noel & Robbie? Pretty please?"
It's a natural for a sequel -- a ..."
YaY!!! You know I love you, right? Not as much as I love Robbie, or Jake, or Adrien, or Septimus, but... well, you get the picture. ;-)
ns wrote: "I'm coining the adjective lanyonesque for it now. :).
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I should stop listening or I will DEFINITELY get a swelled head. :-D
But I'm very glad you're all enjoying this story.
I remember after it came out, someone pointed me to a discussion where some folks were debating whether the story was actually fanfic. I was floored -- and not particularly flattered.
Which wasn't completely fair because I don't have a problem with fandom. God knows I'm a nut on the topic of British crime shows from the 70s. :-)
But because I had never even seen the show (and still haven't, though it did come highly recced by a few people) and because there seemed to be so many similarities, this story lost favor with me for a time. I really didn't even want to hear about it.
Isn't that a weird thing? The creative impulse is a weird one.
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I should stop listening or I will DEFINITELY get a swelled head. :-D
But I'm very glad you're all enjoying this story.
I remember after it came out, someone pointed me to a discussion where some folks were debating whether the story was actually fanfic. I was floored -- and not particularly flattered.
Which wasn't completely fair because I don't have a problem with fandom. God knows I'm a nut on the topic of British crime shows from the 70s. :-)
But because I had never even seen the show (and still haven't, though it did come highly recced by a few people) and because there seemed to be so many similarities, this story lost favor with me for a time. I really didn't even want to hear about it.
Isn't that a weird thing? The creative impulse is a weird one.

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I should stop listening or I will DEFINITELY get a swelled head. :-D
But I'm very glad you're all enjoying this story. ..."
Don't worry about it, Josh. There is NOTHING fanfic like in Icecapade.
Fanfic, even the one that is "naturalized" to create original fiction, will still read like a fanfic. The world building will be choppy, with many things missing.
When you write fanfic, the universe and characters are built for you. Your readers will have known the setting and the characters before they read your work. Most of them are already in love with the characters and setting.
In original story, your hardest task (for me) is introducing readers to your universe and make them like your characters.
This is why I abandon my attempt to "naturalize" my fanfics, though some of them are quite popular, it seems. It will never work.

To be honest, I hadn't even heard of the term fanfic until a few weeks ago. Not seen it, no interest. I suppose I'm old school pure reader. I read every genre as a kid, mostly classics, mystery, thrillers, westerns, fantasy, sci-fi, you name it, I've read it.
I never read romance, so I am new to this.
But I think you might be well served to discard whatever comments might have led you to think less of this story. It's a gem, and it has depths, and it's one of my favorites and I'm pretty confident I could argue their asshattery under the table, not that I'd want to waste my time in that fashion.
So thank you for Icecapade. It's simply lovely, and meant a lot to me. I'd rather pay ten bucks for it than the swill that's sitting at the top of the best sellers right now. Where's the justice...

I run a White Collar blog--and I know from that site, from private communications and from the coms on LJ that many White Collar fans adored this book and rec'd it. But I don't think it was a work of fan fiction! Robert and Noel are distinct characters, as is their storyline. It's just that die-hard Collars don't care whether we have to squint a little or a lot to see Peter and Neal, and so we'll devour any Fed and charming thief.
(And White Collar is derivative, like most (all?) stories are to some extent: it pays homage to To Catch a Thief and Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid and both versions of Ocean's Eleven and lots of other stuff.)
Meanwhile, I don't think the way some White Collar fans latched onto this book is a bad thing--and I'd guess that the majority of people who read it appreciated it for the characters and story in their own rights. Plus some fans (especially the slash fans) were already also fans of yours--but for those who had never read your stuff before, this book may have been a 'gateway drug.'
Edit: I see you responded to one of the posts about this on LJ! I don't think the person who rec'd the book there meant any harm, but I can understand why you'd be upset about the way it was done. (But I know people who bought the book because of that rec--and, like I said, they probably didn't stop there. Your writing is addictive!)
Another Edit: Oy--I'm making a mess of this, but I'm trying to say that the book is marvelous, and that if some people want to squint and read Peter and Neal into the text, it's just a happy coincidence. (I think you should get readers by any such coincidence, because you'll keep them due to the excellence of your writing.)

HUH!
I read Icecapade before they started airing 'White Collar' (which I love) over here and I never even drew the comparison.
Still don't.
I can imagine you not being flattered by a debate like that.
I have TERRIBLE taste in TV and movies, so it's absolutely not a judgment of that. :-) I think it was more the idea that people thought I was ripping off a TV show for ideas. Even that sounds more harsh than I intend because we all get ideas for each other and from different sources, so being inspired by a TV show in itself shouldn't have been an issue.
It really did bother me, though. So much so that -- foolishly, as NS points out -- it affected my feelings for the story.
I know that's really stupid. So don't everyone feel obliged to tell me! :-D And I know that no offense was intended! If anything, it was probably a compliment.
J. makes an excellent post that for some readers it was their gateway to my stories, so that's certainly a positive.
I think if I was familiar with the show, was a fan of the show, it would probably have been different? Or would it have been worse? Not sure. Anyway, I do know that I was very stressed by the end of last year and so things that wouldn't normally have knocked me off balance where throwing me for a loop.
So it's good to see this story discussed as it allows me to view it without that bias.
It really did bother me, though. So much so that -- foolishly, as NS points out -- it affected my feelings for the story.
I know that's really stupid. So don't everyone feel obliged to tell me! :-D And I know that no offense was intended! If anything, it was probably a compliment.
J. makes an excellent post that for some readers it was their gateway to my stories, so that's certainly a positive.
I think if I was familiar with the show, was a fan of the show, it would probably have been different? Or would it have been worse? Not sure. Anyway, I do know that I was very stressed by the end of last year and so things that wouldn't normally have knocked me off balance where throwing me for a loop.
So it's good to see this story discussed as it allows me to view it without that bias.

I know that's really stupid."
Hey now. I hope you know "foolish" and "stupid" are not words I'd use in conjuction with Josh Lanyon, under any circumstance, in any conversation, right? :)

And there were many genuinely heart-warming moments that blended naturally into the narrative and didn't sound 'forced'. Even the episode with the baby llama was very endearing, for itself and in how it revealed Robert's feelings for Noel.
Like another poster said, I would love so much to read about their first sexual encounter on the eve of the Millennium and the events that led up to it...

The sex scene was so tender. And I really loved the end of that scene... and this is going to sound a bit weird... but I loved the way it was worded: "Robert fucked him harder and faster and deeper until the moment seemed to stretch and stretch and grow timeless - unique and fragile as a snowflake against glass - and then Robert was coming, exquisite relief pulsing in satiny long jets." It sounded like so much more than just the messy exchange of bodily fluids... you really do have a way with words, Josh.
It was such a sweet story.
Josh wrote: "It's a natural for a sequel -- a story about Noel being pressured to do one last heist -- so probably. Although I hasten to add I don't have immediate plans to write it. It's just that as I was writing I kept thinking...oh, what if...
Which usually leads to sequels."
That would be great if you did end up writing a sequel to this story (or even a prequel, as a couple of people have already mentioned). :)
ns wrote: "I'm coining the adjective lanyonesque for it now"
LOL, that is an awesome term! (you should trademark it... Lanyonesque™ :D)

That is one of the things I really love about Josh's books, the way the he writes the sex scenes. So often in other books they are repetitive and boring and even sometimes crude and there are too many of them, but not in his books. They are necessary to forward the story, they are sweet and full of emotion and the language is usually very beautiful. And that makes them hot in my opinion :)
CK wrote: "I finished Icecapade yesterday. It was like a dessert at a 5-star restaurant (small, yet completely satisfying). I really liked both of the characters - Noel was (I feel) very realistic in how he..."
:-D
Thank you. I do think there's a potential for a brief story there.
I admit the number of people who bitch about novellas and novella-length stories have led to me cutting out a lot of ideas for sequels and so on. If there isn't enough there for a novel, and readers don't like novelettes, then there really isn't anywhere for me to go. That's kind of where that follow up is stuck.
:-D
Thank you. I do think there's a potential for a brief story there.
I admit the number of people who bitch about novellas and novella-length stories have led to me cutting out a lot of ideas for sequels and so on. If there isn't enough there for a novel, and readers don't like novelettes, then there really isn't anywhere for me to go. That's kind of where that follow up is stuck.
Anne wrote: "That is one of the things I really love about Josh's books, the way the he writes the sex scenes. So often in other books they are repetitive and boring and even sometimes crude and there are too many of them, but not in his books. They are necessary to forward the story, they are sweet and full of emotion and the language is usually very beautiful. And that makes them hot in my opinion :)
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Thank you, Anne.
Kind of a funny thing -- I don't mind writing sex scenes, but hearing them read aloud is one of the MOST embarrassing things I can think of. Hearing audio books with those bits is just...fast forward time. :-D
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Thank you, Anne.
Kind of a funny thing -- I don't mind writing sex scenes, but hearing them read aloud is one of the MOST embarrassing things I can think of. Hearing audio books with those bits is just...fast forward time. :-D

That's too bad that there's a lot of readers out there who don't like novellas (there are some stories that work much better when they're not unnecessarily drawn out).
(BTW, LMAO about listening to audio books with sex scenes - that'd be so awkward!)

That is one of the things I really love about Josh's books, the way the he writes the sex scenes. So often in other books they are repetitive and boring and even sometimes crude and there are too many of them, but not in his books. They are necessary to forward the story, they are sweet and full of emotion and the language is usually very beautiful. And that makes them hot in my opinion :)
I couldn't agree more, Anne.
And so well put :)
Each sex scene in Josh's books is poignant and relevant to the story and the characters.
CK wrote: "(BTW, LMAO about listening to audio books with sex scenes - that'd be so awkward!)
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Somehow it has the same effect as discovering your grandmother is reading your work.
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Somehow it has the same effect as discovering your grandmother is reading your work.
Josh wrote: "CK wrote: "(BTW, LMAO about listening to audio books with sex scenes - that'd be so awkward!)
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Somehow it has the same effect as discovering your grandmother is reading your work."
NOT that such a thing ever happened. Thank you, Jesus.
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Somehow it has the same effect as discovering your grandmother is reading your work."
NOT that such a thing ever happened. Thank you, Jesus.
Paola wrote: "Each sex scene in Josh's books is poignant and relevant to the story and the characters.
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Thank you! That's my basic criteria for including a sex scene.
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Thank you! That's my basic criteria for including a sex scene.

Here is a scene: Noel and Robert went to the stable to fetch Christmas ornaments. Noel climbed up the ladder, then he lost the balance and fell down in Robert's hold.
- While in Robert's arms, Noel thinks; "If Robert would only..."
What kind of words do you think would follow the line?
- Just a bit after this line, Robert says; "What was that supposed to be?"
What would "that" refer to, the fall or the attempted kiss?
- Noel says, "If you don't know, one of us has a problem," and replies Robert "Tell me something I don't know."
I just can't figure this out. Is it a commonly used exchange? What's it like if being rephrased.
I'm truly grateful if I could receive some tips for the above questions.
Also, I'm sorry if this post is not appropriate to this thread. If so, please tell me, I'm going to move it right away. Thank you. (aka MrsMalone_emmie)

It is probably Josh who should answer this, but I will try. But first, I find it very fascinating and also interesting to learn how different backgrounds lead to different understandings. To learn a language well one also need to learn the culture, the references unique to the country. I sometimes wonder what I lose when I read British and American books in English not knowing the culture in depth as a native would. ). And it took me years to understand that British and American English differs also because of the different cultures in the two countries, so that they don't always understand each other either.
So as a non-native English speaker trying to explain English phrases to another non-native speaker (with a different cultural background altogether than mine) I am probably likely to say something wrong :) But since I like to live dangerously, here it goes.
I think for your first question it would be: "If Robert would only kiss me".
The next: "That" refers to the kiss.
The last exchange is a common one and means that both parties know there are some things they should work out together. Robert says in other words, that he agrees with Noel, he has a problem.
Anne wrote: "It is probably Josh who should answer this, but I will try. .."
I dread rereading my work, so please feel free to jump in and explain. I can't even remember writing those lines. Let alone guessing what I must have meant. I really would have to go back and look at them in context.
I'm going to staunchly assume I had SOMETHING in mind, though. :-D
I dread rereading my work, so please feel free to jump in and explain. I can't even remember writing those lines. Let alone guessing what I must have meant. I really would have to go back and look at them in context.
I'm going to staunchly assume I had SOMETHING in mind, though. :-D
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