Creative Writing discussion

Any questions, comments, side conversations, or anything else based from the thread To Accept a Command will be here.

One difference here is that in order for the story to lead up to the other to make sense, i will allow talk of what should happen in the story. However, please keep this talk to a minimum, don't be a dictator when trying to give your ideas. ;)

First of all, this is AWESOME. I'm so excited!

With that said, I don't really know how to work Kia into it, so I might not post for a while. Since she didn't grow up with everybody else, it's going to be harder to work her into the story. Maybe she could live in the town that Felway grew up in, but didn't know him? Or she interacts with someone who is from their town? I dunno. Anyone have any ideas?

Now remember, Felway gets his mind wiped of most memory, so the possibility of them knowing each other is likely. Idk how long it will take for them to get to Felway's dad, so maybe Kia could intercept them when they are walking.If you do make kia talk to Siki and Zen, find a way to erase their minds from knowing her.Because they didn't in TDC

That's a good idea. I had forgotten about Felway's memory.

But in TDC everyone was way differnt then they would be now, so they might just not remeber each other naturally.

ummm
Can we make a character page for this story?

It's only 3 (?) years before, so the people would not change. I decided to not make it when they were kid-kids because i wanted them to be able to understand what was going on and respond to things maturely.But my point is that in three years time, they probably will be able to remember each other. And also, the wiping of some of Siki's and Zen's memory could lead up to great action and drama in the story. ;P

Also, i'll go and make the thread now.

Oh yeah, i guess your right. XD
It so much fun!!!

I have an idea for a new character that could effect Zen and his magicness.

So at first, he was against magic. His thoughts were that it was unnatural and cheating. But then there was this girl, I'm thinking like her name is Laine or Reese, whatever not the point. He falls in love with her, but then she dies. She dies, and he could've saved her with magic. We'll figure out how she dies in the RP, but then he decides to become a mage to help people.

Like it?

i do!

:D Now just for John and Kia to agree.

XD BTW I love Zen's character page.

Lol thanks! I like Siki's picture.

haha really? It's the only ones i could find that i kinda liked.

Oh. I use google.com , photobucket.com and deviantart.com

oh. i use google. but i use http://www.google.co.kr/ or http://www.google.com/webhp?hl=ja

more often i mean.

well, like i mentioned before. When i edit these, i would like to stay AWAY from the use of magic. But it wouldn't really make sense. But yeah, that sounds cool.

It's just that i don't encourage or like magic stuff.

But do whatever. I'm not in control :P

http://radishfriends.deviantart.com/g...

Here is a map i threw together quick just so that we wouldn't be confussed on locations.

You guys can add to it if you want. I just needed to know where they were.

That is a cool map John :P

I am a little confused about the ages though. Because in To Disobey a Command, both Fel and Siki were 16, and Zen was like 22 or something. If this is three years before, shouldn't they be 13 and 19?

Sorry, I'm writing Kia's character and trying to figure out what age she'd be.

Nice map! I like ur user name too :P

And okay! I'll do my best to stay away from magic... though in the older version Cassy is a mage...

idk about the ages... I guess i could change it. Sure why not

So Fel and Siki are 13. and Zen is...19... (lol)

but yeah, sure idc.

I don't care what the ages are, I just want it to be consistant. We can keep it at 13 and 14, I don't care.

idc either. Though it is kinda funny cause it reads : "Zen looked back in front of him to avoid being taken aback by the girl’s childhood charm."

like he liked her or something right?

No, Zen should be 16 because he left when he was 18. So we'll have to tweak them.

That works out better. I'll edit the first post in the story for him to be 16

(S) Asami Kiyomi 화재 桜 wrote: "idc either. Though it is kinda funny cause it reads : "Zen looked back in front of him to avoid being taken aback by the girl’s childhood charm."

like he liked her or something right?"

He doesn't LIKE like her he just thinks she's cute as a friend. Kat can correct me if i'm wrong.

ohhhhh! sorry, my english = still back :(

It's okay.

Where did I post that. And who was it about? o.o

hahaha, i dont remeber, i think i posted it in a flashback..?

wha? i thought it was... idk just go through your posts if you are still confused.

I got to go anyway. Bye

So Kia and Felway are from the same village?

yep.

I don't know if i should have Cassy come along, does anyone have a prefrence?

get cassy away. Like have them abduct her or something, because at the beginning of the first one, [TBC], cassy was not with siki and she was like... idk where she was, she wasn't with them.

Cassy was with the uncle, wasn't she?

Wait wait wait!
So that idea I had,
what if she got killed by the other 'dark' people as a threat to Zen to back off?

How can Cassy get killed if she's alive in TDAC?


And Cassy was with the uncle yep ^^

cassy was with uncle... and kill her off in the third one, not the first if you want.

OOOOO. What's the third one going to be about?



And, I have an idea for how Fel, Siki, and Zen get their memories erased. Do you guys want to hear/debate it, or be surprised?

we already know how felway does.. but maybe he could get it wiped a second time.

But i would kind of like to be surprised on it.

Cassy has to die...? Ohh.. i wasn't planning on killing her, cause i was going to kill the parent in this one at the end.

no. if you want she can. but she cant die this book so you still have time to think it over. but she doesn't have to die. It's your choice.

Kat (Rar) wrote: "Wait wait wait!
So that idea I had,
what if she got killed by the other 'dark' people as a threat to Zen to back off?"

NTO CASSY! The girl I brought up earlier.

which is whom?

The girl that died and convinced him to become the robin-hood mage to use his powers to be good.
I don't know it was just an idea...

i am confused...? What does NTO mean?

I meant not, sorry it was typo.

oh, lol! I am sorry, some idiot told me it mean Not Too Old

winning ^^^ XD anyway. idk who your talking about, but just do what your thinking when it comes, it sounds awesome. ;)

haha I like ur idea Kat!