The moments that stick to me like a burr are reading his physical descriptions.
The wind which breathed on a house all night and the woman sticking up her washing who rigged up a ray of light. Just great ! These lines are often not thematic but take you out of the poem.
The wind which breathed on a house all night and the woman sticking up her washing who rigged up a ray of light. Just great ! These lines are often not thematic but take you out of the poem.