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I wrote one story one good reads and would love to know what you have written or look for in a book

What did you write??? I wanna read it! ^u^

Tori wrote: "What did you write??? I wanna read it! ^u^"

I wrote a story about Zombies It's called brain dead thanks for commenting
P.S Did you write anything

Cool!!! Can you post it??

My stories are under the writing topic: Tori's Stories

What do you mean post it?

I read some of your story they are so awesome!!!!!
:)

Thank you!

Sorry, sorry. I mean can you post a link? Or is it not on goodreads?

I will but how do you post a link sorry i'm not the smartest person with a computer?.?.

Aha, it's ok. Go up to the place where you type in the www.blahblahblah.com thing when you're at your story. Highlight it and copy it, then when you come here, paste it in the comment thingy and that will be that. It will show up as a link.

That is a good idea i'll just copy and past it in the comment but I warn you it is some what long and has some grammatical errors

The reason i'm crazy (edit)
chapter 1 — updated Mar 10, 2011 — 1918 characters
I may or may not have mental issues but all I am certain about is i'm paranoid,but for good reason.This is that reason
I wake up to the sound of a blood curling scream,I jump(to be more exact feel I out of bed wrapped in a coquina of blankets).I dashed out of my bedroom door nearly slipping on the loose rug in the hallway leading to the kitchen.As I blinked my eyes willing to get them to focus in the dark, a pair of heavy hands fell on my shoulders and whirled me around temporarily confusing me,my heart beat was so loud that I was sure he(I suspected he was a he because I had a feeling) could hear my heart beating.When my eyes adjusted in the dark i saw his face, his eyes were blood-shot and glazed over he had sagged bluish skin-when my survival instincts kick in I grab the nearest weapon which just so happens to be a pot on the stove.I swing it straight for his head it makes a disgusting crunch.He laid on the floor twitching then stopped when I heard another scream.I nearly trip slip on the black sludge oozing out of his head when i run to the source of the scream, it was my roommate Katie she was surrounded by these-these what were they... but I couldn't get lost in my own thoughts I had to help my friend. When I saw me her eyes pleading she yelled for me to help her so I did.I grabbed the lamp on the night stand and pulled it out of the socket and started lasing out at the...Um right then I realized what me and Katie were up against and thought terrified me leaving me paralyzed unable to do anything as I waited-waited for what waited for the zombies to eat me. But that didn't happen instead right as
I was able to move something heavy hit me on the head and I started to feel dizzy when I feel someones strong arms hold me... then the darkness started to surround me until I was asleep or dead not sure yet.

The lies they told (edit)
chapter 2 — updated Apr 03, 2011 — 2097 characters
I wake up with a killer headache on a scratchy and faded pink blanket(mine). I begin to think that what happened was a demented, morbid, and just plain creepy dream but just to make sure it was I call out to Katie I wait awhile then try again but when theres no response I walk over to here room across from mine."Katie",I whisper then when I reach her bed and see her I practicably collapsed with relief I turned the lamp on when I saw the clock and it said 10:00, but when I saw her I screamed she was shot in the head. I was about to run for the phone until I noticed something more terrifying than the bullet wound it was a bite mark all over her arm it looks like someone one tried to cover it up.I wonder who.Just then chill flew up my spine I could tell someone was watching me, but all of a sudden i felt self-conscious. I froze not knowing what to do,I heard footsteps coming from behind me I looked for any possible weapons(nothing...not even a lamp). Then the mysterious person covered my mouth with a wet cloth,I started to feel dizzy then realized what was on the cloth(chloroform)son of a bi...
I woke up confused (again)but this time it was different I wasn't home I was in something that looked liked a jail-cell ,no it had glass walls.Where am I?I was scared and all the emotions I tried to ignore started rushing to the surface I yelled,I yelled for my dead friend, for myself, I yelled until my throat and lungs burned.Then I cried ,I was never the type of person who acted out such self-pity then again i'm sure this was a exception.I started to babble incoherently to a camera on the wall of the room I was prisoner in until a petite woman who wore a sophisticated suit and calm expression came up and opened a door I didn't know was there and gently guided my by my arm down a narrow hallway saying nothing.I felt calm in her presence even though I still had no idea where I was or who she was.When we reached the end of the hallway she opened the last door,(it was red and all the others white).When I stepped inside I felt like I stepped in my own unmistakable hell.

We entered the room that made me want to just die-The Morgue- just the idea of being near dead people made my skin crawl but it was it just being in this morgue that scared me it was who was laying on the cold metal slab.
"Katie" I whisper to myself,I feel my eyes sting with tears.
The woman puts a hand on my shoulder but I don't want her pity so I shrug her off, at that moment she leans in to me as if anyone can hear and says, " I know this is a bad time but i'm Martha and I need to talk about your friends death". She lead me to a Dark blue leather couch when i sit she cups my face and look at me intently my surprise must have showed on my face because she quickly lets go of my face and lets out a nervous chuckle









!!!!!THE REST WILL COME SOON!!!!!

Soooo yeah thats that um hope thats good enough

Alexandria wrote: "That is a good idea i'll just copy and past it in the comment but I warn you it is some what long and has some grammatical errors"

...Can....Can you write some more??? I wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe those blue things shot her friend...or even know how to use a gun! I need to know why she's there...who that lady is...and the main characters name. ^-^ Overall, I liked it!!!


I wouldn't be to caught up on whether your chapter is long or not. This:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
will most likely deplete your worry for yours being too long. ^-^

Thank you!
Oh my god you are so nice if I actually met you I would definitely be you friend,
PS: you are my favorite person out of this book club.
You can get all this information on my page on goodreads the story's called brain damage or dead cant remember also I will tell you that the "blue things" or Zombies as I call them didn't shot her friend the..Wait sorry cant release that information at least not now um the lady's name is said in the story on my page and so is everyones or most peoples.
You are the best!!!

Aww Thanks!

here is the story i wrote (it is in the making & not very good yet). its non fiction actually about me and my best friend (i changed our names, i'm libby, she's elisa). read it and tell me what you think!! :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

oh & keep in mind that i am not very old (preteen) So it is probbably not very good.

Wow your story's cool and same here with the age

oh yeah i um wrote more on the story

thanks!

Please read mine:) I'm still working on it and havent thought of a title so its just random but plz read it and comment on what you think it needs:) thnx:)

I mainly write micro-fictions but I would love someone to read my stories and maybe one day I'll expand them and turn them into a story :)

Amazon link: 
http://www.amazon.com/Pegasus-Marilyn...
My new novel Pegasus is now on sale at major bookstores. 
About The Book:
Widowed at thirty, Hannah Bradley is a successful journalist focusing on animal abuse issues. An accidental meeting introduces her to lawyer, Winston Caughfield III. Drawn to Hannah's gentle beauty and fierce commitment to her work, Win joins her in fight to save wild mustangs from slaughter.Together they rescue a badly injured horse with a mysterious background. Hannah's search to discover the animal's true identity leads them into web of black marketeering and international intrigue.

I'm working on a YA fantasy book. I'm about 1/3 finished, and have just put up the first four chapters. Let me know what you think--I've finished 7 so far, so I can put up more if anyone likes it. :-)

The description: When Stana discovers a Ministry official following her, she makes a snap decision to flee the towers of Section C with her brother. On the way, she saves the explosive and passionate Lukas from a life in Ministry prisons and he joins them on their quest to find out what happened to her missing father. Is he the kindly mill-worker and artist that she knew as a child, and was his disappearance a simple case of surprise illness or calamity, or did he deliberately vanish, as the Ministry suspects?

Here's the link on goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

My story that I have a couple of chapters on in another group for writers on here. I would post some of mine but only a couple of chapters. I will probably put some of the chapters on my blog just to get some feedback.

It sounds great ill look for it

www.goodreads.com/story/show/278930-f...

The first chapter of my story is up...it's super long, but I hope someone will read it!!!

After undergoing dangerous operation, a girl discovers her shape-shifting powers. In her new life at the Alias Institute, she joins her friends in her new life as a member of the Phoenix Clan.


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Please read! Chapter 2 is up...

ill read it sounds good

FictionPress link!
http://www.fictionpress.com/u/784220/...
scroll to the bottim and press on the links to my different stories!