The Dark Hunter World discussion

Here's a story I wrote for English featuring Acheron and Soteria: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2.... Can I get some feedback please? And I really need a title, so if anyone has any ideas, please let me know?

P.S. if anyone knows the Atlantean word for 'sweetheart' or something similiar (for his daughter) that would be great.

im looking...i cant find it :(

Thanks for looking, but I think I found it. 'Ademe' is one Acheron uses for Simi, so I think that'll work. Thanks anyway!