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May 17, 2011 07:57AM
I started doing Haiku very recently after my friend Nic showed me how to do it.Please tell me your favorites, or what you think of them!
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Converse~~~~~~~~~
These aren't two agents,
They're made of two layers, not one
My shoes, grey and black.
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Sometimes I have a hard time figuring outvthe syllabals, so sometimes they're messed up, but hopefully most of them are 5-7-5.
Winnie the Pooh~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Winnie the pooh and co.,
Hundred Acre wood and all that
care for thistles or honey?
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created May 6, 2011
Theater~~~~~~~~
All the world's a stage,
accentuating is in,
Drama is the key word.
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created May 6, 2011
Car trip~~~~~~~~~
Way too many hours,
14, too be exact
On the way to Indy.
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Created May 8, 2011
This was a haiku inspired by a play I was in-Sudafed
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Deadly poisonous,
but Riley doesn't know much,
Look out, Cameron!
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Created May 8, 2011
Local Coffee Shops~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Down a small sidestreet
hidden cups of java
Lazy Daze Coffee
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Created May 10, 2011
Starbucks~~~~~~~~~~
Scones and a shady awning,
My first time yesterday,
My standards are met!
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Created May 10, 2011
Back from vacation~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
No more laziness,
No bouncing on trampolines,
No cousins for months.
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Created May 16, 2011
My back to school haiku~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I kinda wish to..
Its half and half; both ways equal
September is here.
Italian food~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Linguini or an
Italian Panini:
both good and awesome.
On school~~~~~~~~~~~
Leo Tolstoy writes
a depressing, sad novel
aka his life.
Grace wrote: "Theater
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All the world's a stage,
accentuating is in,
Drama is the key word.
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created May 6, 2011
Life's theatrics are
not written in a big book,
but in a big heart.
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All the world's a stage,
accentuating is in,
Drama is the key word.
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created May 6, 2011
Life's theatrics are
not written in a big book,
but in a big heart.
Grace wrote: "Winnie the Pooh~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Winnie the pooh and co.,
Hundred Acre wood and all that
care for thistles or honey?
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I like 'thistles or honey'- nice contrast.
created May 6, 2011"
