TWILIGHT HATERS discussion

Did anyone else notice that she tended to use the same words over and over and OVER? I wish I'd counted how many times the word "murmur" was used but I only started counting towards the end, it was 9 times. Oh and the word "pursed". At one point the only thing I enjoyed from the book was waiting for these words again, like a game.

Oh, I totally know!! Did you also notice how Edward murmured, but Bella mumbled? That bugged me too!!

im pretty sure she ran out of adjectives to describe edward so she fell back on ole faithful: perfect, beautiful, cold ect.

Ya! Especially the part where deadward and bella are alone and all they did was murumur and mumble and bella was like "OMG he has a BEUATIFUL chest, and beautiful face! OMG OMG OMG!!!!" Well, technically that happened through out the whole enitre series but especailly in that part.

Yes! Every single time she went on and on about how beautiful and "god-like" he was I threw up a little bit in my mouth.

This word is the cause of ongoing jokes at anti-shurtugal: chagrin. Apparently SM (mis)uses it quite often. (A word for your vocabulary: malapropism, the incorrect usage of a word.) Also, I lost count of the number of times Edward spoke with a "velvety voice".

YES if i went through the book and counted every "velvet" I'm sure I could get into the triple digits.

lol I know seriously! We get it already bella!!! He's like the most beautiful person you've ever seen in you life considering all the ugly people you've been around your whole life(not to mention herself!)! Now shut up about it bella!!! If Edward could read her mind do you think he would get sick of her thinking about his body and voice every 2 seconds? How pathetic.

Why can't Edward hear Bella's thoughts? Elementary, my dear Watson. God (a.k.a. Stephenie Meyer) has mercy on his non-existent soul.

LOL exactly Phantompickles!!

hahahahaha im positive that is the only reason they ever got together. Im sure if he could, he would file a restraining order after hearing all those smutty fantasies in bella's head.

I'm sorry we're the ones who have to hear them all throughout the book! :( We don't care about bella's rape fantasies!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean how could she be so surprised that she got pregnant after all the times that she harrassed deadward? I mean come on Bella grow up a little will ya?

Bella is what we call a "nymphomaniac".

The reason why she was so surprised is because it was previously established that VAMPIRE CAN'T HAVE BABIES. (Cue Rosalie.)Well, you know you're doing something wrong when even the characters in your book notice the logical fallacies.

stephanie meyer probably thought she explained it in some twisted way. watever. it was gross. mutant lochness monster baby?!? ew.

And since when can mutant baby learn to understand talk when its still in her stomach?! I found that quite disturbing...

What hit me as disturbing is...I saw it coming. Ew...I know...but back when I was reading New Moon, I predicted what was going to happen. And, I hit it dead on. Even though nobody believed me...*coughs*

yeah I know what you mean. I new by the second book that they were gonna gave a pertyyy kid together in some twisted, demented way. Bingo.

EW. I have not read the 4th book yet and for that i am thankful---TALKING IN THE WOMB???? What is this woman on?!?!?!?!

crack(and o- blood(its in the last book)) obviously. she's so high throughout the books she thinks she is in love with a vampire and is having a mutant kid. :)

Lol. Oh, that was painful to read.

I think the part where "nessie"(devil' child) drank blood was also pretty painful to read.

No, no, the whole thing was a fanfic. I've read a couple fanfics on what people thought should happen in BD, and, trust me, the actual BD is just a summary of all of them thrown together.

i heard some awful rumor about stephanie meyer taking some fanfictions and publishing them??? tell me this isn't so.

I certainly hope not. I haven't heard anything about it...I'm going to go verify it though...0_o

if she does that!! So help me!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHh!!!!

It's not on her website, so it's probably just a rumor.

I will go insane. If she does that.........

Yeah, I heard that rumor too, but honestly, her shizit already reads like baaaad fanfiction.

'Kay. Overused word: Glare.

Is that the only verb of staring she can use! Ugh, it was so annoying.

my fanfiction is that Edward Finally cracks (oh wait, he allready has!!) and kills Bella... mwahahahaha....

Thats sad...

thats not sad! I'd actually read the books a second time if they happened to change that small*cough*HUGE*cough**cough* detail of edward eating bella!

I just really don't think Edward should eat Bella. But "HER BABY' TALKING IN HER WOMB???? (i haven't read the 4th bookyet) ar youkidding me??

what? where does the "her baby talking in her womb?" what the heck? I don't remember reading that?!

Edward can hear the the mutant baby's mind while she's in the womb.

wtf is a womb?

*shakes head* It's like a mommy's big tummy.

uhhhhh...umm...ok...whatever...disturbing....? :(

So... what exactly does the baby think? (I didn't know babies could think...)

Ugh, I can't really remember. I'm pretty sure she's thinking about how much she loves her mommy.

And, I think that babies can think - I mean, they are a living thing.

Yeah, but their brains haven't develop properly.

Hm. Whatev; I believe that they can think.

Hmmm, they probably could, I haven't study that yet...

*laughs* Neither have I.
Anyway, I'm starving - gonna run. See ya!

buh bye!!

I just came across this thread! Ok, so in here it mentions overused things:

http://otahyoni.livejournal.com/13043...

'Tis aweseome.

OH MY GOSH!
I LOVE THAT!

Oh... *I have no words to explain my feelings for that.*

Edward's beautiful feet???!!!!!!

he can hear the baby's mind but not Bella's? S.M. make up your mind does he read minds or not???

I know that is so annoying! What the heck is so special about Bella anyways? And was anyone else bothered by how Bella was a "perfect" vampire and all she had to do was snap her fingers and she could control herself and not kill people and crap like that?

I HATE BELLA SWAN. I HOPE SHE WAKES UP FEELING VERY BRAVE AND STRONG ONE MORNING AND WALKS IN FRONT OF A TRUCK.

BUT SHE PROBABLY WOULDNT DIE CAUSE DEADWARD WOULD SAVE HER

DAMN YOU DEADWARD!!!

oh wait...YOURE ALREADY DAMNED!!


HA!