The Write Stuff discussion

Hey everyone!! ! Umm...yeah, this is my story (I haven't finished yet, I'm only on like chapter six, but I promise I'll write more once I feel motivated) and my poem. Any comments are good comments, so yeah, feel free to comment.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...

Hey , guys this is my link to what im writing , hope you enjoy it .

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...