Warhammer 40k lovers discussion

ok so anyone who wants people to look at their writing (Warhammer 40k Writing relevant) can tell everyone here that they have writing, and suggest that everyone go look at it. You can discuss it here to if you so choose.

I have a story, called um....Frifgore's Entrails...Oh yes, and if anyone comes up with a better name (you can tell i'm not very good at it) then please comment. the name can be imperial or chaos, i'll eventually use one of each.

So what is your story about??

Ramjet wrote: "So what is your story about??"

My story is basically about a member of the imperial guard. During the first few chapters, his friend dies, right before their company gets rescued by the salamanders. Then, when Treyton (who's name WAS frifgore) tries to lose himself in the winter surroundings by taking a walk, he gets captured by Fabius Bile himself. There are a couple of chapters of experimentation, by which Treyton is horribly mutated, and then he escapes. Throughout the story, he meets up with his sister, who now gives up her inquisitor status to help him (who is now deemed as chaos), blah-di-blah, haven't written much more, but he will eventually kill his sister, become chaos, have his wrongs dawn on him, fulfill a prophecy, record his tale (hence "Treyton Entails," my new title) and then finally disapear into the deserts, never to be found again for a millenia, in which his exoskeleten mutation is found buried beneath the sand. Most likely by a descendant or distant follower of Fabius...

im also wrighting a story. im still working out all the kinks though.

What is the general idea?

a a squad of ig guards men in a huge battle that last 3 days striat.

intresting idea writing stories based on the settings of warhammer. read two "chapters" of henry's book, not too shabby at all.
does anyone do any other genre writing?

Henry wrote: "Ramjet wrote: "So what is your story about??"

My story is basically about a member of the imperial guard. During the first few chapters, his friend dies, right before their company gets rescued b..."

Sounds good so far. I like the whole sister was a inquisitor angle. I like hearing about Fabius Bile, he's such a sick and twisted character in 40k. Would like to hear more on your story as you write it.