Cloud Nine discussion

Am i as a cloud,
free to take any form?
Am i as the stars,
outnumbering the many?
Am i as the sun,
shining ever-so-brightly?
Am i as the moon,
serenely glowing radiance?
Am i as fire,
a burning flame of desire?
Am i as the waters,
a gentle force to be reckoned with?
Am i as the gold of men,
highly coveted?
Am i as me,
an unknown spirit looking for itself in a everlasting mirror?

I like the "am I" repetition in this.

Did you know that you can add writing to your own page as well? I just added three things to mine.

I need to tell the class about this on Thursday.

Thanks. i liked your writing

THANX

Multiple elements...including the obssesive nessecities which are not as they seem...great, Trey, just great.

I like your open question format and the juxtapositons. Good one.

Very beautiful!
Alice

NICE!