Writers support discussion

Ooh, i like it a lot. I noticed a few things during the boar scene, like after Eli was attacked you switched prespective without any warning, though I could see that it wouldn't be very exciting from Eli's perspective. And when Elyse was dodging the bear, after only two dodges, she was "growing tired". but other then that it was great, and i liked the premese.

True, although probably not after two dives. Though, in my VAST experience in diving onto my face (no joke :)), I can see your point.

thanks!