Writing Passionates discussion

((ok this is just a random story. We can make it up as we go along. SO ya.))

Lena walked into the middle of a road and laid out her blanket she began to do her homework

((uhh?? dus wat i say have to do with my character?)))

((Your charrie has to do something now so I belive the awnswer to your question is yes))

((but I cant!My charrie dosent have anything to do with urs! He lives in Japan!))))

Lena sighed happily as she put away her math and got up to pack her bags. Tommorow she was off to Japan

((all better))

((lol))

((well it is))

((so now what??))

((make your charrie do something in Japan so that I can skip to tommorow when her plane lands!))

((but what do i say to close the gap between ur ... like.... half a sentence to a whole days trip to Japan??))))

((Just say he did something and went to bed))

((so i have to talk about MY charrie?))

((yes!))

((lol. ok ughhhh!!! HOw about...)))

Now-sing finished the profile on who he would be working with. THey were sending someone from America named Lena. He went to bed wondering what she would be like.

((why dont we have someone be the narrorater? he could do stuff like: Suddenly the man walked n. And he is not an actual charrie))

((usually ppl only do that with secondary charries that are like in for two second or mabye one of the plots for a bit))

((oh. Well, ur turn.))

The plane laned and Lena got off.

Now-sing was late. He needed to get to the airport and fast.

Lena looked around for Now-sing where was he?

he got in his electric hybrid car and turned on his portable computer. He hacked into the traffic systems and turned all the lights on his path green. He rushed to the airport and got there in less than two minutes. He got out of the car and said hi to Lena

((Hospital???))

((LOL!))

((k I fixed it))

"hello" Lena said curtsying.

"Con-I-Ji-wau" said Now-sing, bowing.

"I'm Lena, though you probably already know that" Lena said

(( uhh she just said hi in the last comment)))

(9all better!))

((( ok)))

"Lena, weighs 125 pounds, top in her class, got here at 3:32 and left from California at 12:53. I might know a little more about you than you would like."

"I see" Lena said as she went from casual Lena to professinal Lena.

"Well yes. I assume we should get to business" said Now-sing. " I will have my chaffur (((((((dont know how too spell that)))))) drive you too your hotel. Please; this way".

((I LOVE THIS BOOK! I READ IT ALL IN ONE DAY!!))

Lena got into the car.

((its okay I don't either))

((good. And wat book Cali???)))

Now-sing shut the door. "do you like my chaffeur?" he said, pointing to the empty drivers seat. He smiled and left to go into his other car.

"Does this mean I get to drive?" Lena asked.

((who is she talking to? oh! I know....)))

"That is not authorized" said a computerized voice. "hello. I am your Computer Chaffur System or CCS"

"Hi electronic thingymabob" Lena said.

"salutations" replied the CCS. "Now taking you to your hotel. You may look at the GPS screen if you like. Just ask".

"okay then" Lena said akwardly putting her thumbs up and nodding slowly.

"I see" replied the CCS. A GPS screen unfolded from the ceiling where the DVD player would be. "your hotel I believe is the orange dot" said the CCS.

Lena nodded and looked at the screen

"you've found it okay?" CCS replied to her nod.

"yes" Lena said

"that is good. It should be coming up on your left"

Lena nodded.

"Here we are" said CCS. "I hope your trip was comfortable" CCS stopped the car, and opened the side door.

Lena smiled "thank you" she said stepping out of the car and shutting the door.