future authors discussion

ok so this story is called I live in the dreams of other people and its in a poemish format, but still flows like a real book! I have had some feedback but by the same people each chapter! so please review it and leave a comment on any chapter on the writing page thanks eveyone!

-toli

the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

i thought it was interesting

:-)

thanks!!! did u leave a comment on the page?

oh and btw, im gonna try to finish it up before november and nanowrimo!

it's good