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message 1: by Pippin (new)

Pippin (pippin-plover) Ah, that is a fun poem! Shades of Lewis Carroll...


message 2: by Pippin (new)

Pippin (pippin-plover) Haha!


message 3: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments Cool. Congragulations!


message 4: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments You're welcome


message 5: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments I normally don't read that kind of story, but that's really good!


message 6: by Pippin (new)

Pippin (pippin-plover) Teehee! I grin just reading it. Fine translating skills indeed! :D


message 7: by Rudy (last edited Nov 14, 2011 05:04PM) (new)

Rudy | 484 comments ((Who was the girl? I don't recall.
BTW, half of your thing is italicized.))


message 8: by Pippin (new)

Pippin (pippin-plover) Sorry- I posted that before I saw the name of the girl there. :P


message 9: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments I agree, Hawke is such a cool name.


message 10: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments Hey, Thera, are you on?


message 11: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments I thought I was the only one who got on at this time.


message 12: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments East coast of where?


message 13: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments I'm in Australia, that's why I was surprised anyone else is on.


message 14: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments Most of the people on seem to be American.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Thera... Could you please stop it? What, you ask? BEING SO EFFING AMAZING AT WRITING!


message 16: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments I think it was


message 17: by Rudy (new)

Rudy | 484 comments Sounds like it.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Yep!


message 19: by [deleted user] (last edited Nov 21, 2011 01:42PM) (new)

Thank you for including the part about my silly Danuta. XD


message 20: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments Wow. Very powerful. What's Jessie's power?


message 21: by Rudy (new)

Rudy | 484 comments He can throw his voice, last time I checked.


message 22: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments Cool.


message 23: by Pippin (new)

Pippin (pippin-plover) Oh, this is most intriguing... Indeed, a story must come of it, or I shall certainly drop down dead of curiosity. Who are "our people?" Was the chasm in London or elsewhere? What's this Thomas fellow like? Splendiferous start, Thera.


message 24: by Rudy (new)

Rudy | 484 comments Minor Aintagonist, huh?

Daniel: I AM NOT MINOR!


message 25: by Rudy (new)

Rudy | 484 comments Oh. Never mind then. Ignore this awkward penguin.


message 26: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Wow.


message 27: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
This sounds amazing! I can't wait to read more, Thera!


message 28: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Captivating, Thera. I'd say you really have something great in the works, here. Your imagery is good an strong, the dialogue engaging and easy to follow, and it still leaves me wanting more. :D


message 29: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
You're definitely good at it. :D


message 30: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Are you planning on finishing it as a full novel?


message 31: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Can't wait to read more, and I'm hoping to see it on the shelves someday!


message 32: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Where did chapter two go?


message 33: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
:D Just wondering if I missed anything. *reads chapter*


message 34: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
I really liked this part. The only thing I would suggest is to make the guide either not there or unable to help. If he's a tour guide, he'd probably be able to get them out with his knowledge and flashlight. Maybe he just disappeared on them, doubled back to get something? It seems a little odd that a guide wouldn't know how to get out, y'know? Otherwise, *applause*.


message 35: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (last edited Dec 31, 2011 12:52PM) (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
:D Nice. Like he just reads everything off a card he has up his sleeve and follows a set path?


message 36: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Hah, he deserves it.


message 37: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
^_^


message 38: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Nice. Now you've got me hankerin' for chicken pot pie. :)


message 39: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments Are you going to right some more? This is really cool!


message 40: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments Could you write more on the Academy? It's incredibly cool and I really want to read more about it.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

Larissa: You could join the group, too? http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/5...


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Thera. O. M. G. Dude!!!!! Have I mentioned how much I love your writing? If not, like thiiiiiiiiiis *arms stretch like elasta-girl's around the earth* much.


message 43: by Larissa (new)

Larissa | 56 comments I did join the group , bu it's confusing. I can't keep up with what's happening to whom when. Especially with so many rooms and so many characters. That's why I like your stories, Thera.


message 44: by Rudy (new)

Rudy | 484 comments Maybe you just aren't used to that kind of RPing. Its fairly standard for me.


message 45: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Θήρα (Thera) When insane, call me wrote: "It was clearer this time, a silhouette in the thick fog. Aline’s eyes narrowed as she watched it, but it vanished again. Now she knew she wasn’t seeing things- but what the heck was that? Far too fast to be a bear, but too big to be anything else. Somewhat distorted, even. What in the world was that thing? ..."

It's the Grim! Eek!


message 46: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
:*D Loved it, Ther. 'Specially since it speaks to me, personally.


message 47: by Maggie, All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 415 comments Mod
Always Virginia. :)


message 48: by Grouphug (new)

Grouphug | 12 comments Θήρα (Thera) wrote: "My first actual poem! It's a little nonsensical, but there's some actual sense hidden in it.

Utter Flippancy


Come hither, my child
Come hither, my dear
And we shall talk of many things.
..."

great stuff.........


message 49: by Cloudy Storms (last edited May 25, 2012 05:33AM) (new)

Cloudy Storms (cloudstrife) | 347 comments Is it just me, or doesn't the title remind me of a certain album from a certain alt rock band?

:P


message 50: by Cloudy Storms (new)

Cloudy Storms (cloudstrife) | 347 comments Wait, it wasn't One Thousand Suns? Oops. Well, it's a nice album. And is there a meaning behind the One Thousand title you titled to title your story?


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