Penny for Your Thoughts discussion

Ah, that is a fun poem! Shades of Lewis Carroll...

Haha!

Cool. Congragulations!

You're welcome

I normally don't read that kind of story, but that's really good!

Teehee! I grin just reading it. Fine translating skills indeed! :D

((Who was the girl? I don't recall.
BTW, half of your thing is italicized.))

Sorry- I posted that before I saw the name of the girl there. :P

I agree, Hawke is such a cool name.

Hey, Thera, are you on?

I thought I was the only one who got on at this time.

East coast of where?

I'm in Australia, that's why I was surprised anyone else is on.

Most of the people on seem to be American.

Thera... Could you please stop it? What, you ask? BEING SO EFFING AMAZING AT WRITING!

I think it was

Sounds like it.

Yep!

Thank you for including the part about my silly Danuta. XD

Wow. Very powerful. What's Jessie's power?

He can throw his voice, last time I checked.

Cool.

Oh, this is most intriguing... Indeed, a story must come of it, or I shall certainly drop down dead of curiosity. Who are "our people?" Was the chasm in London or elsewhere? What's this Thomas fellow like? Splendiferous start, Thera.

Minor Aintagonist, huh?

Daniel: I AM NOT MINOR!

Oh. Never mind then. Ignore this awkward penguin.

Wow.

This sounds amazing! I can't wait to read more, Thera!

Captivating, Thera. I'd say you really have something great in the works, here. Your imagery is good an strong, the dialogue engaging and easy to follow, and it still leaves me wanting more. :D

You're definitely good at it. :D

Are you planning on finishing it as a full novel?

Can't wait to read more, and I'm hoping to see it on the shelves someday!

Where did chapter two go?

:D Just wondering if I missed anything. *reads chapter*

I really liked this part. The only thing I would suggest is to make the guide either not there or unable to help. If he's a tour guide, he'd probably be able to get them out with his knowledge and flashlight. Maybe he just disappeared on them, doubled back to get something? It seems a little odd that a guide wouldn't know how to get out, y'know? Otherwise, *applause*.

:D Nice. Like he just reads everything off a card he has up his sleeve and follows a set path?

Hah, he deserves it.

^_^

Nice. Now you've got me hankerin' for chicken pot pie. :)

Are you going to right some more? This is really cool!

Could you write more on the Academy? It's incredibly cool and I really want to read more about it.

Larissa: You could join the group, too? http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/5...

Thera. O. M. G. Dude!!!!! Have I mentioned how much I love your writing? If not, like thiiiiiiiiiis *arms stretch like elasta-girl's around the earth* much.

I did join the group , bu it's confusing. I can't keep up with what's happening to whom when. Especially with so many rooms and so many characters. That's why I like your stories, Thera.

Maybe you just aren't used to that kind of RPing. Its fairly standard for me.

Θήρα (Thera) When insane, call me wrote: "It was clearer this time, a silhouette in the thick fog. Aline’s eyes narrowed as she watched it, but it vanished again. Now she knew she wasn’t seeing things- but what the heck was that? Far too fast to be a bear, but too big to be anything else. Somewhat distorted, even. What in the world was that thing? ..."

It's the Grim! Eek!

:*D Loved it, Ther. 'Specially since it speaks to me, personally.

Always Virginia. :)

Θήρα (Thera) wrote: "My first actual poem! It's a little nonsensical, but there's some actual sense hidden in it.

Utter Flippancy


Come hither, my child
Come hither, my dear
And we shall talk of many things.
..."
great stuff.........

Is it just me, or doesn't the title remind me of a certain album from a certain alt rock band?

:P

Wait, it wasn't One Thousand Suns? Oops. Well, it's a nice album. And is there a meaning behind the One Thousand title you titled to title your story?