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Thera... Could you please stop it? What, you ask? BEING SO EFFING AMAZING AT WRITING!
Thank you for including the part about my silly Danuta. XD

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Captivating, Thera. I'd say you really have something great in the works, here. Your imagery is good an strong, the dialogue engaging and easy to follow, and it still leaves me wanting more. :D
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I really liked this part. The only thing I would suggest is to make the guide either not there or unable to help. If he's a tour guide, he'd probably be able to get them out with his knowledge and flashlight. Maybe he just disappeared on them, doubled back to get something? It seems a little odd that a guide wouldn't know how to get out, y'know? Otherwise, *applause*.
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Thera. O. M. G. Dude!!!!! Have I mentioned how much I love your writing? If not, like thiiiiiiiiiis *arms stretch like elasta-girl's around the earth* much.

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Θήρα (Thera) When insane, call me wrote: "It was clearer this time, a silhouette in the thick fog. Aline’s eyes narrowed as she watched it, but it vanished again. Now she knew she wasn’t seeing things- but what the heck was that? Far too fast to be a bear, but too big to be anything else. Somewhat distorted, even. What in the world was that thing? ..."
It's the Grim! Eek!
It's the Grim! Eek!
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Utter Flippancy
Come hither, my child
Come hither, my dear
And we shall talk of many things.
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great stuff.........