Your writing discussion

I'm waiting for the hate posts to rain down on my unforgiving head. Please read, enjoy, and critique, I can always use criticism.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

The storyline was really good! But that's an...erm...interesting...choice of words you've got there...

Haha, yes my characters have very colorful vocabularies. Do not worry, their tongues will be more civil when the story calms down a bit (I hope). They have a mind of their own.

If I post something here, the list'll be alphabetical again ^^