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Ella
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Oct 07, 2011 06:06PM
1-It's not in the beginning when everything is perfect and breakfast is overlooked as important. But as the story goes on it diminishes and it stops altogether.
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10. she dosn't ever get it or lunch, or sometimes not dinner. so obviosly breakfast would be importent...
8-Very close, I know that that is not good, but it sets up the story better. Cecelia lives in a perfect world, therefore she is perfect also.
2- Alyssum has seen to much to trust in people any more, plus it's not in her nature. She's mistrusting to say the least. Though she does trust her family and best friend... that is until he betrays her.
liesel-9 at the beginning, because she has no reason not to, but 6 ant the end, when she has been betrayed by a friend in a situation where it seems that one has to die
((Well, ok. I'll try to answer this one...))Cecelia-7
I guess she is somewhat main-stream...But I still don't understand that phrase (I'm blonde).
Alyssum- 6The more I think about it, the more I realize she is very like the general population of the colony. The only difference is, she's willing to try to change things (or run away)


