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message 1: by MollyRena (new)

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The Lonely Angel Caroline sat on the ground, talking to herself.

((btw, her other elf is someone she talks to but she doesnt realize that she is another her. O.o))


message 3: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 16, 2011 06:14PM) (new)

Logan was hidden in a tree. She tried to block out all the thoughts.


The Lonely Angel "Im being good, i really am."
"Not good enough Caroline."
She was crying and kept talking to herself.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

She stepped back and the twig her hand was resting on snapped. She quickly grabbed another.


The Lonely Angel Caroline looked up. She saw Logan and walked over slowly. "H-h-hi."


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Logan was scared. Everyone hurt her. Her mom, the man that took her here." Please leave me alone.." She whimpered. She couldn't tell if people were nice or not because of everyone that hurt her.


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((G2G.))


The Lonely Angel Caroline stared at her. "Im sorry, I didnt mean to scare you." She started crying. "I didnt mean to." See! You hurt everyone! Nobody likes you!


message 10: by Matthew (new)

Matthew Peper (seathethescaleless) | 5 comments Matt was sat next to a tree.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Spasam wrote: "Caroline stared at her. "Im sorry, I didnt mean to scare you." She started crying. "I didnt mean to." See! You hurt everyone! Nobody likes you!"

Logan could tell the girl was upset." It's OK. I'm just new." She climbed down and hugged her.


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Logan said," Everyone scares me. But you don't anymore." This was true. She was calm enough to tell her thoughts and she found Caroline was really nice.


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Kristin watched them from a window. She looked at Logan and Caroline. When Caroline started crying, she frowned. But when Logan hugged the girl, clearly trying to make her feel better, Kristin's face beamed with delight.


message 14: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments Rosario sat alone beneath a tree, his face shadowed. He was silent and didn't seem to want anything to do with anyone, and just sat there seeing a black fog float around him, but no one else seemed to notice it. It was always there wherever he went, and no one ever saw it.


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Kristin looked at Rosario sadly.


message 16: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments A black mist flashed around Rosario for a moment before it wasn't visible anymore except to Rosario. He didn't seem to be bothered by it, and he still didn't look at anyone or anything.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Kirstin saw the black fog. She took out a note pad and scribbled something down.


message 18: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments ((she should come say hi!))

Rosario felt the hit of the fog against his face and red flashed around him before a bruise started forming under his right eye. He hung his head and his shoulders shook as if he was crying, which he was a bit. That hit, it had hurt so much, because since it was so hard of a hit that the bruise formed so quickly. He felt sick when he the black fog surrounded him as it became visible.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Kirstin climbed down the steps to the park. She slowly made her was to him.


message 20: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments Rosario heard footsteps but didn't look up at Kirstin as she came over. He pulled his mother's scarf closer to him as he shook, tears slowly running down his face.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Kirstin knelt." Are you OK? What happened?" She was worried.


message 22: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments Rosario didn't answer, he suddenly saw blood and his eyes, they went unfocused and looked confused. He suddenly looked up at Kirstin and tears streaked his face. He didn't say anything and he held his scarf closer, closing his eyes as he pulled his knees to his chest and buried his face in them.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Kirstin took out a small water bottle. She placed it by him." It'll make you feel better. Trust me." She stood and walked alittle ways away to make sure he drank it.


message 24: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments Rosario looked at the water bottle and took it, drinking some water before he just curled up on the ground, blinking a few times to stop the tears from spilling.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Kirstin smiled. The boy drank it! Good.


message 26: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments storm was walking around


message 27: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments storm lok up and see Molly. she walk towrd molly and smile


message 28: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments storm was beside her "Hi Molly" as storm look around wondering why she get stuck here


message 29: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments "how are you"


message 30: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments "scared" she said as her face look scared


message 31: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments "new around here and my freiodn not like it either"
(ok)


message 32: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments she smile


message 33: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments "yeah"


message 34: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 14 comments "myslef" she smile


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Jared sat by the fence, thinking of a way to escape this prison.

Hunter sat on the ground, hugging his knees and stuffed bear, all he could see was fire.


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Jared looked at Mallory, waving slightly.


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments "Yeah....the people tell me that I need to get out..." He said, looking at the imaginary people.


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Jared only chuckled. "Oh, nothing...." Hesaid with a smile.


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Jared nodded cheerfully. "I guess you're right!"


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Jared looked at Mallory curiously. "The people say that I shouldn't....we can be friends."


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Jared just watched her walk away.

Hunter began to hum a song, still hugging his bear.


message 42: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments Taylor wrote: "Kirstin smiled. The boy drank it! Good."

Rosario sighed and drank more of the water, feeling the burning in his throat start to slowly disappear. He got up and looked at the ground, about to walk inside when he heard a small meow. He looked over and saw a little dark brown tabby rubbing against his leg, staring up at him with its striking green eyes. Rosario smiled softly and kneeled down, stroking the kitten's fur while it purred and curled up in his lap.

((awwwwwww how cute! lol))


message 43: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments ((for who?))


message 44: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (goodreadscomizzy) | 11 comments ((sure insane or not?))


message 45: by Matthew (new)

Matthew Peper (seathethescaleless) | 5 comments Matt rocked back and forth.


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Hunter continued to hum.


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

Izzy *The Magical Mushroom of Death* wrote: "Taylor wrote: "Kirstin smiled. The boy drank it! Good."

Rosario sighed and drank more of the water, feeling the burning in his throat start to slowly disappear. He got up and looked at the ground,..."


Kristin smiled as she watched him. Then she went inside.


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Hunter looked at Kristin and watched her walk inside.


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Kristin sat down at her desk.


Colton *AKA Razor* (RazorlovesHetalia) | 67 comments Hunnter looked at his bear, and then back to the building where Kristin had walked into. He stood up and walked inside.


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