Once Upon A Time... discussion

11 views
Fun/Games > Sentence...

Comments Showing 1-50 of 62 (62 new)    post a comment »
« previous 1

message 1: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
Let's write a story. Start off with one sentence, and then add a sentence one at a time.

Once upon a time...


message 2: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments There was a beautiful girl.


message 3: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
Her name was Anobethion, and she traveled to the far reaches of her planet.


message 4: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments she was always in seach of an adventure but never found one until......


message 5: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis She met a handsome blond boy named Thorne.


message 6: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Who was never happy with what he found he always had to go out in search of more thrill.


message 7: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis Thorne told her that he had found an old cave in a long-forgotten meadow of lilacs.


message 8: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
He wanted to run away to there for all of eternity.


message 9: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Thorne asked her to come with him


message 10: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
And she really wanted to, but a lass she couldn't because


message 11: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Her life form was tied to her home planet and to break away she must get permision form the "Others"


message 12: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis She had heard old stories about the others, and that they would grant you permission to leave depending on one thing.


message 13: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
Your soul.


message 14: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis " But why my soul, of all things?" she asked


message 15: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
An old man replied, "For it is not your looks or experiences that define who and what you are, it is your soul."


message 16: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments She had a tough decsion to make, does she choose love or her soul?


message 17: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis She pondered this for only a minute and then said: "Take it. Take my soul."


message 18: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
The old man turned into an evil witch, and cackled with glory, "Your soul is gone, but with it leaves love."


message 19: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Then she felt as if she was floating,then black.


message 20: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
She woke in the dawn of a new day, but she felt different...empty.


message 21: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Anobethion had no interest in doing, anything.


message 22: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
SHe felt no fear or lust or love, she only felt gone.


message 23: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments what had she done to herself?


message 24: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
and where was thorne?


message 25: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Did he go without her, and did she even want to go?


message 26: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
What worried her was that she didn't know.


message 27: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments The next day he came to her.


message 28: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
But she did not know it was him, for her soul had held her memory as well.


message 29: by Aubrey (last edited Oct 30, 2011 01:25PM) (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments He said to her "What did they do to you love, I will find a way to fix this."


message 30: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
She paused and asked him, "What is a love?"


message 31: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Thorne who was keeping it together until then broke down saying "do you even remember me?"


message 32: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
Anobethion looked at him puzzled, "What is remembering?"


message 33: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments He then stormed out of the cave, leaving Anobethion confused.


message 34: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
She was sullen with grief and couldn't decide whether or not to follow this mysterious man.


message 35: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis She walked out of the cave and into the bright sunlight of dawn.


message 36: by Aubrey (last edited Oct 30, 2011 07:09PM) (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments He was gone almost as if he had vanished into thin air.


message 37: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis She looked everywhere for him, but still came up empty handed.


message 38: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Thinking to her self where would he go, but she couldnt even remember his name.


message 39: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis She faintly remembered a hidden crystal blue lake in the forest and decided to go there.


message 40: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
She traveled into the forest where she came upon a tall, slender man.


message 41: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments "Who are you?" she asked.


message 42: by Maddie (last edited Nov 01, 2011 03:12PM) (new)

Maddie Davis "I am an alien to this planet" he said.


message 43: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments "what planet would this be?"


message 44: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis I come from the planet Zymna, where everyone has a unique special ability.


message 45: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments "What would your special ability be, if I may ask?"


message 46: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis "My super ability is to rewind time."


message 47: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments Time, that rings a bell, but what about it do I want to change?


message 48: by Maddie (new)

Maddie Davis "My choice. I gave my soul away. I want to change my choice."


message 49: by Gracie (new)

Gracie (amazinggracie5683) | 140 comments Mod
"Ah, a soulgiver is what you are." The tall man looked down at her, as if he was afraid.


message 50: by Aubrey (new)

Aubrey (avidreader24) | 86 comments "I'm not sure that is within my right to give it back."


« previous 1
back to top