THE LISTS discussion

Novel Update – 10%


“No man might buy or sell, save that he had the mark or the name of the beast, or the number of his name."




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Haiku:


1) It is 3 a.m.
I am still awake in bed
Too much in my mind

2) Wake refreshed, I stand
body leaps from mind, I float
senses lie, I fall

Novel Update 20% - “Adam knew that his life was about to take a turning he could never reverse - he couldn't surrender himself,, now, he wouldn't surrender himself: He needed some time"



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Haiku:

Darkness beholds a mystery,
Uncertain in the absence of clues,
Where fears gets a kicking.

Novel Update 30%

Quote – “Going underground, going underground / Well the brass bands play and feet start to pound. For safety is not a gadget but a state of mind.”




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Haiku:
The air becomes thick
A change in humidity
Time to find safety

Novel update 40%


“He looked over his small congregation. ‘Who, amongst you, has sinned?’”

To attack the weak minds
Caged thoughts
Trapped in the unknown

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Novel Update - 50%

“Adam Kindred had truly disappeared, truly gone underground, deep underground. He had a new life and new opportunities before him, now – the future really did belong to Primo Belem.”

New name tag, identity
Rebirth of the befallen
Illusion of choice

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Novel Update - 50%

“Adam Kindred had truly disappeared, truly gone underground, deep underground. He had a new life and new opportunities before him, now – the future really did belong to Primo Belem.”

New name tag, identity
Rebirth of the befallen
Illusion of choice

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Novel Update - 60%

“He seemed quite pleased. As long as it’s legal, she said, turning to kiss his neck. ‘Let’s get naked, shall we?”

“Sex to replenish the soul
The temptation of mind
Emotionless state


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Novel Update - 70%

“He read the text beneath it with a cold, creeping sense of foreboding that brought out goose-bumps on his body. ‘Young woman - early twenties - unidentified – accidental death most likely …Adam felt light-headed”

Heart skips a breath
Guilt, woe, grief
Eternal loss


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Novel Update - 80%

“Primo Belem was either a man who had nothing to hide or a man who had everything to hide.”

The silent master minds,
Big game, hidden mysteries
Revolving conspiracies

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Novel Update - 90%

“Over arm, over react, over kill”

Arms loaded
Savage actions
Destruction within

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Novel Update - 100%

“Adam felt in a turncoil of emotions as he sat watching Lyon, his arms hugging his knews, and, triggered by the thoughts of escaping convicts and prison hulks, found himself wondering if Turpin’s body had made it this far downstream.”

Love found,
Ordinary thunderstorms settle
Memories shine, emotions flow



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