Weekly Short Stories Contest and Company! discussion

And left him standing there, all alone.

LOL

The guillotine slammed shut, sending shivers up the expectant audience.

aww, but so sweet and sad!

She popped the candy in her mouth as she contemplated the turnout of the investigation.

Oh, follow me into the park, where we will love, then fall asleep.

The one word Jared had loved to use when Isabel was angry at him — a gentle reminder that he would always love her.

And she slept for eternity.

By the time she decided to go back home, the marmalade in her kitchen cupboard had grown mold.

While Man builds skyscrapers, God scoffs at his pettiness.

He’d only done everything and would have done anything for them – forever.

That sounds like the end to a hero-centric epic.

What, my line? Or is that one of your lines? Sorry, I'm confused now.

Yes, your line.

Oh. Thanks. It's the very last sentence to this year's NaNo novel. It was science fiction.

I usually like science fiction. Is it on goodreads?

My line was from a short story about scientists pushing the limits too far, resulting in an ironic wrath of God (ironic because their punishment is their success). I may post it soon.

No, it's not. It's the last book in a trilogy and I'm still fixing up the first book.

nice

The sound shattered the night, breaking the silence of September.

XD Hey, it could be a last sentence

Do it lol

As the body fell, the stray arm hit a box, spilling markers. They clattered to the ground, bouncing ominously.

I know right?

He stared after the girl, disbelieving.

Those poor things :)


She drew the shroud over the body, watching the flames envelope her love.

lol i dont have anything good

She sprayed the disinfectant, removing all traces of him.

nice i should read it :)

le gasp! alex!

YES I DO! OMG

well, study without urges XD


XD I hate it when you can make connections to your own charries. You feel like you copied XXDD

XDXDXDXD

night al :)

"Demon, or whatever the hell it was, of Twilight is toast," Kidel told Hiem triumphantly, after the ceremony was finished.

Hiem, wearing enough black to possibly have confused the wedding for a wake, did his expressionless scoff. "There were three, remember? If that was Twilight, what do you think the next is?"

As the wedding festivities moved inside a large, well-lit tent, the last of the sun's rays slipped off the little river.

Have you written any more of the Crazies, Al?

He leaned back in his chair and took a sip of that perfect brew.

I usually only finish about the first act then start rewriting it. I'm terrible that way.

I should know who Alan Rickman is, shouldn't I?

Oh, him. Yeah, he's an excellent actor. As much as I hate watching a musical about cannibalistic revenge, he, Hellna Bonham Carter, and Johnny Depp all made it worth the experience.

I'm still never watching that movie again.

Alex wrote: "And he, the man she could only dream of having, walked away, leaving only footsteps in the snow."

Nice. Love it, Alex.

And everyone lived happily ever after.

“When you’re done spreading your wings and flying and if you land on your feet, and if your ready…please come back. Because I’ll be waiting.” he said and then leaned down and kissed my forehead. He let go of my hands and walked away.


sry its more then one sentence

(crying) Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

She watched the rose petal's descent, smiling as it landed upon her lips, just like that last kiss.

(headdesk) I'll try harder tomorrow.

Night, Al! See ya tomorrow!!!

10:00? What part of the world are you in???

Oh, diff. time zone. Sorry... I should've thought of that.

"I yanked open the door."
Blurg...terrible sentence... have to fix that.

'Least it contains an essence of mystery. What's behind the door???

This is the way it always had been, always would be...unless we changed it.

DUCKY!!!!! YOU'RE ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And commenting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice line, BTW.

Thank you.

No prob'!!!

I opened my eyes and said, "Holy gabflax! You're alive!"

AHAAHHHHAAHHA, I loooooooove Emily the Strange. Flabjax.... nehehehehahaha..... (Emily cuss words)

This is just the end to a chapter but ...

Kyeme didn't know if to snarl or cheer his name. "Ope!"

The whole thing:
http://mauchitales-journey.blogspot.com/

That's truly lovely, Edward.

The last thing she felt and wind and sea spray, the tang of salt cool on her tongue, as she slipped away.

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good old Al!!!!!!!!!!!!! You just made my day!!!!!!!! XD

Well, thank you.

The stars flickered, and faded one by one, until only one was left. Then even this star vanished, and she was left in the blackness.

God, I need to stop writing tragic end lines.