Teenage Book Lovers :P discussion

Here is a list of all my writing on goodreads.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/6...
I'd be grateful if you could give me feedback, especially on the new ones.
Thank you :)

hey guys :)
This'll be the last writing post I put up . . .
I've added 2 chapters of my story 'How I See You' for xmas.
I'd love some feedback. :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Thanks a lot!! :D