The USA discussion

I know that this is totally not what the group is about! But I desperately need people to my story. PLEASE? I love constructive criticism! Anything is welcomed. Just go on my profile and it is my only piece of writing on Goodreads! I plan to add more! Thanx!

Here's a link!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

nice beginning! I only had time to read chapter one but great beginning!

Thanks!

PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!